[FANFIC] Lucid Memories 8/20

[rain_sonata]

Title: Lucid Memories
Author/Artist: Rain_Sonata
Character(s) or Pairing(s): America/England/America or US/UK/US
Rating: PG-13, might raise up later
Warnings: boy love, occassional swearing, confusion of what's happening, longer chapters later on, hints of the existence of state-tans
Summary: Rev!America is brought back to the present, replacing

Comments

[iggyxalfie]

Whheeeee a new chapter~~

I loved it =D
Oh Alfred... you sure love to bully him dont you xD

[rain_sonata]

Why, yes I do.

[rain_sonata]

Thank you! I see you have quite a collection of fanfics yourself from your account. I just checked some out, but I guess I'll go read them tomorrow. Got to go finish some writing myself. I'm getting so lazy that I can't even finish the epilogue of this story, lol.

[rain_sonata]

I'm sorry, but what is Glee? People keep saying it's funny and awesome, but what is it? From what I know, it's like High School Musical, but is it really that good?

[hoshiko2]

Haha, England's getting all blushy over an American. Well, the number one American, but he doesn't know...yet. I wonder how he'll react if he finds out. Probably not nearly as well as Present Day Iggy does. I'm interested to see what'll happen.

Also, just a constructive criticism. There are times that your grammar is off and words are in the incorrect spots. Might want to reread your writing slowly or have a beta. It's nothing major, just something I've noticed in all of your chapters and in this one, an entire paragraph had a lot of mistakes.

But otherwise, I'm always reading. :3

[rain_sonata]

Don't you just love blushy England? Ah. And I thought my grammar was okay TT_TT. Okay. I'll go back to it. Someday. -cries in the corner- My grammar sucks... Thank you for your kind comment. I love you so much for sticking to this fic.