Twas great to see a post from you! Glad you're hanging in there :-)
This was beautiful and bittersweet. I loved the affection and reassurance. The way time has marched on but they're so close and gain strength in being with each other through it all. It's a great subject and done so well here with Legolas and Gimli. You've treated it beautifully.
Might want to go through with a quick editing pen... "He The dwarf sighed" and "touching. . Breaking the embrace,Breathing harshly," for example. Also, maybe I missed it, but I didn't understand where that document suddenly came from.
Anyhoo, it was great to hear from you AND have nummy sneezefic!
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This was beautiful and bittersweet. I loved the affection and reassurance. The way time has marched on but they're so close and gain strength in being with each other through it all. It's a great subject and done so well here with Legolas and Gimli. You've treated it beautifully.
Might want to go through with a quick editing pen... "He The dwarf sighed" and "touching. . Breaking the embrace,Breathing harshly," for example. Also, maybe I missed it, but I didn't understand where that document suddenly came from.
Anyhoo, it was great to hear from you AND have nummy sneezefic!
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They were my beta's corrections mingled with mine. *sighs*
I think they're fixed now...thank you so much for pointing them out :)
You didn't miss it...the document was a long standing joke between my beta and me-I admit I couldn't figure out where it came from-
Thank you so much for the feedback...I want to write more and have high hopes for further posts :)
~BVB
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