Without Words.

[rainbowhonda]

She heard the sound of the door opening as she lay on her bed. She didn't care. She just tightened the grip of the blanket around her. The door closed and she felt a heavy weight next to her. She was reluctant to respond. She sighed. She sat up and let the blanket fall from her shoulders. Kanda stroked her hair and her face with the deepest look of

Comments

[prodigymeltdown]

She gave a breath as if to say she consented.
♥♥

[rainbowhonda]

<3
Thanks.

[silentdictator]

So pretty! There's like a hidden meaning to these words. At least it seems like this is just a little snippet of something bigger. Short and sweet and really, really great. :D

[rainbowhonda]

Thank you! And there is if you look close enough.
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed.
Maybe I'll write a little more of it. >83

[dementiamorphea]

It's short but really pretty! For criticism, I felt like there was a little much of "she" being repeated, but if that was your intention, then nevermind. There was quite a lot of unspoken emotion, especially in the "She gave a breath as if to say she consented." line, just gorgeous. Well done!

[rainbowhonda]

Yeah I have a habit of using that to much. 8D Thank you. <3