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I Told Him, But He Didn't Believe Me

Jan 26, 2012 11:28

Title: I Told Him, But He Didn't Believe Me
Author: rainbowruse
Rating: M15 - Some potentially triggery things, some abuse.
Length: 8000+
Spoilers: Um, none really. Completely AU. But maybe I should say everything just in case.
Summary: Rachel Hudson kept house, smiling on the outside but withering away inside. At least until Quinn Fabray moved in ( Read more... )

trigger warnings, rachel/quinn, r18 to be on the safe side, 3000+, glee, faberry

Comments 27

ess_ca_pe January 26 2012, 07:50:23 UTC

Epilogue! Epilogue! Epilogue!

rainbowruse January 27 2012, 07:48:22 UTC

Lol, definitely being considered.

sashadiamondz January 26 2012, 13:44:16 UTC

Omg yesss! Please epilogue!

This is so fantastic, you wrote this beautifully!

You're an Incredible writer.

Much love x

rainbowruse January 27 2012, 07:49:38 UTC

Hah hah, I'll seriously start work on it and see how I go. Thanks so much! Cheers for taking the time to read and comment =]

t8kmybreathaway January 26 2012, 16:57:01 UTC

Uhm epilogue? Is that even a question? Uhm YES! HAHA!

I love it. The 1950's feel is awesome. I could totally see myself back in that time too. Great job.

rainbowruse January 27 2012, 07:50:47 UTC

As if I could refuse to start one after this kind of feedback lol.

Thanks so much! I was going for an authentic feel, but I wasn't 100% on how to go about it. Good to know I hit the mark at least somewhat.

kiarcheo January 26 2012, 17:01:23 UTC

Hell, yes! I need an epilogue
I hated the 'subject' but I love how you wrote it. It was beautiful

rainbowruse January 27 2012, 07:51:53 UTC

Way cool. Yeah, it was a bit.. dark. I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless!

mjacton January 26 2012, 19:21:38 UTC

Yes, of course, there should be an epilogue!

I loved this! I was skeptical of Quinn's course of action at the end because it seemed unlikely she could get away with stabbing Finn. But, you did a good job of finding a plausible story which I think could give them both a way out of trouble as long as the authorities don't automatically take his word over theirs (if he lives). This was the 1950s. Self defense wouldn't necessarily work, but an accident might.

On the other hand, maybe you were going for what should happen, and I can go along with that.

Anyway, that was a long way of saying you did a great job, and, again, I vote for an epilogue.

rainbowruse January 27 2012, 07:55:23 UTC

It was a bit hard to make the situation plausible and have Quinn not appear mentally unstable, lol. So I think I'm going the realism route as much as possible. Though if I have to employ elements of fantasy, rest assured I will do just that. The last fic I wrote didn't have a very conclusive or happy conclusion. This will be a different story (hah hah).

You'll just have to tell me what you think when I post it, hahah :)

Thanks very much for telling me what you thought! Look forward to the epilogue!