[FIC] Warmth

Apr 03, 2010 00:14

Name: Warmth
Pairing: Junseung
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Drama, Angst?
Summary: Hyunseung didn't know what else to do. He's fought it for so long but he can't anymore...He needs to see him
Wordcount: 1,752

Comments: Written on the first night of spring break. I got the the inspiration suddenly  on a rainy ride home from school when the song : "Need you ( Read more... )

pairing: junseung, rainbowtongues, fanfiction: oneshot, b2st, rating: pg-13

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 04:16:10 UTC
Spot for wanpanda!

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wanpanda April 3 2010, 07:28:15 UTC
first i gotta say : I LOVE YOU SFM <3
and lmao you don't owe me that much writing darling ,buuut that doesn't mean i would mind you writing A LOT so i'm not complaining XD
ok brb bb boo,reading :3

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 07:39:06 UTC
awh! I LUFF YOU TOO BB! <3

I owe you writing forever because of what you got me! I owe you smut too! (Even if it is awkward for me to haha )

GO read! GOGOGO!

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wanpanda April 3 2010, 07:47:07 UTC
okay i'm done.
and i gotta say,you totally broke my heart just to put the pieces right back together in the end<3
it was very very good(not like that is something to be surprised about) and i could totally feel Hyunseung's desperation at being away from the one he loves ,wanting just a little bit of his attention back,just craving to see him no matter what. That part really made my heart skip a beat,it was really intense. And Junhyung's reaction makes the whole situation all the more real :). He was surprised and at a loss with finding his Seungie in such a state and at that hour at his doorstep but eventually ...gosh i loved the way you ended it.
he'd never felt so warm... what a beautiful way to show that he loved Seungie and needed him just as much XD
okay so as a verdict : i loved it soooo much ,bb .
you're amazing,just write moreeee :3

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 04:16:34 UTC
Spot for momof!

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momof April 3 2010, 04:43:16 UTC
This is what makes LJ stalking a rewarding thing to do! Imma be back and read this later after my mom's done yelling at me *sighs*

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 04:46:12 UTC
eep! Im sorry to hear that!

*dabs eyes and waves hankerchief* be strongg my dear ;_;

and...then come read ahaha

(btw you're a really good stalker! I posted this like..10 minutes ago)

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momof April 3 2010, 05:19:53 UTC
*plays Superman theme music ( ... )

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his_angel16 April 3 2010, 04:52:40 UTC
the whole time i was reading this, i was biting my lip. it hurts now. haha. this made me wanna cry, but it was amazing. :)

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rainbowtongues April 3 2010, 05:21:26 UTC
aww! Don't cry! But I guess that's a sign I wrote it well haha.

;_;you aren't alone, it pains me to read as well

I so glad you liked it <3

Thanks so much for commenting!

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alwyz_member_me April 3 2010, 19:34:26 UTC
-.-;; I was either way too tired [even though I slept almost 11 hours] or depressed in the first place but I definitely started tearing in the middle of reading this. But this was really written quite well.

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rainbowtongues April 19 2010, 01:42:25 UTC
Thank you so much

*hands you tissue*

<3

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vaneszikkipower April 8 2010, 10:08:55 UTC
I love love Junseung.
This was really good, yes you did not break them :)!!

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