Name: Paper Streamers
Pairing: Junseung
Rating: PG ( D: )
Genre: Drama, Angst, Romance, AU?
Summary: Junhyung wasn't supposed to be the one to make Hyunseung cry...that was never his intention. He wishes more than anything that he can take back what he's done, undo the hurt he's caused, but time is not forgiving, and wishes only work for some...
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Wonderful piece!
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Thanks for the comment!
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Im SO glad you really liked this :D, I wasn't actually the biggest fan of this fic when i posted it. There are many things that could be improved in it but thank you so much for reading and commenting!
I tried to go for something very descriptive, and using metaphor and simile to describe Junhyung's emotions. This was really supposed to end sadly, but I am physically able to break up Junseung aha
So there is hopee <3
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but i really liked it tho'!!!
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THANK YOU <3 I'm glad you like it. I still regard this as my least favorite thing I've written.
Thank you for the comment dear
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"Those tears...drops of liquid silver on a beautiful face weren't meant to be his fault. The vivid image of Hyunseung, distorted in pretty tears-the heart strings of his heart tugged until they snapped like reeds in the wind. Junhyung couldn't get that expression out of his mind."
Ugh, your choice of wording is ♥♥♥♥♥
"Junhyung walked even slower now, his soul scattered like pieces of ripped paper, his hope flying away from him, like a balloon in the wind."
This. ♥
"One Wish. If he found one, he might be able to catch his string of hope in the wind; might be able to bring it to Hyunseung, and be allowed to glue his heart back together. It wouldn't be perfect, and the wind would whistle through the pieces...but Junhyung would guard that fragile, makeshift heart with his life...like he should have from the start.Wow, I just don't even... ( ... )
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THANK YOU BB *kisses everywhere*
In honestly, I really dislike this fic LOL but people seem to really like it.
I tried to word things differently, and make it poetic, but I don't think it worked outtt
IM SO GLAD YOU LOVE IT THOUGH. I love when people give me excerpts they particularly liked.
THIS COMMENT WAS WIN *noms you up* umnumnumnumnum <33
I love your comments SO much! I can't even make a nice one back Im so in love with your comment! haha so I apologize <3
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It's okay! No need for huge monster paragraphs in return. I was just repaying you for the epic comment I received last night. But I think I'm getting a little carried away with myself now. Aha.
I LOVED IT SO MUCH. WRITE MORE JUNSEUNG SOON? OKAY?!! OKAY!
THE END ♥♥♥♥
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<3333
Thanks so much! I love all your comments!
I'll try to write more!
THE END HAHA <3
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