[FIC] Paper Streamers

May 11, 2010 22:51

Name: Paper Streamers
Pairing: Junseung
Rating: PG ( D: )
Genre: Drama, Angst, Romance, AU?
Summary: Junhyung wasn't supposed to be the one to make Hyunseung cry...that was never his intention. He wishes more than anything that he can take back what he's done, undo the hurt he's caused, but time is not forgiving, and wishes only work for some...
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pairing: junseung, rainbowtongues, fanfiction: oneshot, rating: pg, b2st

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papersanguine May 16 2010, 07:07:25 UTC
OK, i've also been writing fics with that SAME song on repeat. It's been making me write angst like crazy! Dang that catchy song!

Wonderful piece!

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rainbowtongues May 16 2010, 21:07:25 UTC
really?! haha that's crazy! Yeah that song is a pretty angst inducing song! Thanks so much!

Thanks for the comment!

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ttaejoong_hyuk May 22 2010, 01:01:06 UTC
LAKDGHLAKHJKGAKHGADKLJGADKJGDAFKJADFKJ my goodness gracious i almost cried!!!! the pain!!! ooooh too much to bear!!!! adjkghla but awwww how could junhyung do that in the first place....huuuuu, and that image of hyungseung....gaaah, you described it so well....it really was heartbreaking!!!! goshers....but i'm so happy you put HOPE!!!! 'cause me and angst...yea...we're like oil and water....i still read it...but yea...brighter themes always are more kinder to my fragile junseung loving heart...lol....i really love this....

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rainbowtongues May 22 2010, 16:10:37 UTC
Aww! *gives tissue* Did you? xP Im sorry for hurting your heart like that!

Im SO glad you really liked this :D, I wasn't actually the biggest fan of this fic when i posted it. There are many things that could be improved in it but thank you so much for reading and commenting!

I tried to go for something very descriptive, and using metaphor and simile to describe Junhyung's emotions. This was really supposed to end sadly, but I am physically able to break up Junseung aha

So there is hopee <3

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ttaejoong_hyuk May 23 2010, 02:27:25 UTC
gaah, noooo i almost ahahaha, but i held it in!!! didn't want to stop to wipe tears lololol
but i really liked it tho'!!!

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alyssa1515 July 13 2010, 16:02:18 UTC
Late again, but.. I LOVE IT.. Though it hurts so much.. =)

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rainbowtongues July 24 2010, 21:04:17 UTC
Don't worry xD I'm late too

THANK YOU <3 I'm glad you like it. I still regard this as my least favorite thing I've written.

Thank you for the comment dear

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ashleydesuka August 22 2010, 20:31:58 UTC
Okay, so I promised I would leave comments on the stuff I head read, but didn't comment on. My comments will be nowhere near as amazing as yours, but I'll try! Damn being so lazy. Here I go 8D

"Those tears...drops of liquid silver on a beautiful face weren't meant to be his fault. The vivid image of Hyunseung, distorted in pretty tears-the heart strings of his heart tugged until they snapped like reeds in the wind. Junhyung couldn't get that expression out of his mind."

Ugh, your choice of wording is ♥♥♥♥♥

"Junhyung walked even slower now, his soul scattered like pieces of ripped paper, his hope flying away from him, like a balloon in the wind."

This. ♥

"One Wish. If he found one, he might be able to catch his string of hope in the wind; might be able to bring it to Hyunseung, and be allowed to glue his heart back together. It wouldn't be perfect, and the wind would whistle through the pieces...but Junhyung would guard that fragile, makeshift heart with his life...like he should have from the start.Wow, I just don't even... ( ... )

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rainbowtongues August 22 2010, 20:42:24 UTC
*takes your heart and guards it with lifeee*

THANK YOU BB *kisses everywhere*

In honestly, I really dislike this fic LOL but people seem to really like it.

I tried to word things differently, and make it poetic, but I don't think it worked outtt

IM SO GLAD YOU LOVE IT THOUGH. I love when people give me excerpts they particularly liked.

THIS COMMENT WAS WIN *noms you up* umnumnumnumnum <33

I love your comments SO much! I can't even make a nice one back Im so in love with your comment! haha so I apologize <3

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ashleydesuka August 22 2010, 21:22:37 UTC
It did work out! It was so poetic and ... I don't even know. Everything just flowed along so well. The choice of wording was just, spot on actually, the way you conveyed the feelings and gahh. <333

It's okay! No need for huge monster paragraphs in return. I was just repaying you for the epic comment I received last night. But I think I'm getting a little carried away with myself now. Aha.

I LOVED IT SO MUCH. WRITE MORE JUNSEUNG SOON? OKAY?!! OKAY!

THE END ♥♥♥♥

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rainbowtongues August 22 2010, 21:36:30 UTC
I'm so glad you liked itt <333 It's good to know that sometimes what you thought sucked didn't suck as much as you thought LOL

<3333

Thanks so much! I love all your comments!

I'll try to write more!

THE END HAHA <3

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