.ready or not

Jul 29, 2010 16:53

ready or not,
im here to mug
not to hug

ready or not,
im here to hurt
because there is no more love,

ready or not,
give it up,
there is no more time

ready or not,
its time to hide
becasue i'm the hunter,

you are my prey.
so now its time to pray
hoping you woundnt get slayed.

+poem

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be_ddelusionall July 29 2010, 21:00:26 UTC
Kick ass.
It's like ... empowered. Me loves!!! <3<3<3<3<3

did you spell everything right for me?

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rainbowxrae July 29 2010, 22:00:24 UTC
lol, glad joo liek

i dont know, did i spell everything right :D? *excitement*

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be_ddelusionall July 30 2010, 04:36:30 UTC
this one too
so strong
and so powerful in very few words. girl, there are people that have been writing poetry for years that can't do this like you can
*loves it*

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rainbowxrae July 30 2010, 21:55:48 UTC
strong? lol
epp *blushes* .///. are joo sure?

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