.save

[rainbowxrae]

save my super man
who can only open a can

but inside that can
is more then i what ever have

filled with love and rage,
touch of confused happiness

my man who can only say
that she is my girl.

random word generator.
word; saving.

i lost my thinking thought
casue i went to play dfo.

should i make a tiny comm. for my sexy poems. *shrugs*

Comments

[be_ddelusionall]

for losing your thinking this is pretty damn good

your brain fascinates me
and I want to analyze the meanings behind your poems and i HATE analyzing poetry, but it's like ... simple and deep and I want to know what the fuck you mean

fix the 4th line, it's driving me nuts

[rainbowxrae]

lol orly?

my brain is verry fasinating!
pffttt you have fun doing that. god knows i have no
idea what im writing. half the time

its thar. to bother joo