alone.

May 04, 2011 19:27


drunk. again.

i don't want to be alone. alone i don't want to be.
let me stand so freely, shaken with broken bones in my body. 
never can my eyes speak, nor lips seek,
the only one i want. no more allusions.

yoochun, yoochun. let me love you.

quick, nibble spear, let daggers fear.
i do not want to be alone,
so protect me from the racing hearts.
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be_ddelusionall May 5 2011, 02:31:14 UTC
YAY!!!

dude, your poetry makes my heart clench

Best line: messy tears can only hold so many memories.

I love how this is the dating, the break up and the get back together all in one emotional piece.

It's gorgeous, and I can totally imagine Yoochun bent over a desk writing out these lines like a lyrics to a song with a glass of whiskey and a burning cigarette.

Gorgeous, as always.

WRITE MORE DBSK+POEMS PLEASE!!!

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lucapi14 May 5 2011, 02:38:39 UTC
This is beautiful..
I envy you for being able to write poetry like this..
My poetry.. Ermm.. Yeahhh..

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be_ddelusionall May 5 2011, 03:50:29 UTC
if I could like this comment I would

I totally envy her too because my poetry is always like ... empty feeling

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lucapi14 May 5 2011, 04:33:38 UTC
My poetry.. Ugh.. I don't even know.
So many people like it, but I'm just like
"what.. what is this."

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