a thing on hope - Uruha/Reita - 1/1

[raindigo]

Title: a thing on hope
Chapters: 1/1, oneshot.
Author:  raindigo
Genre: Drama, Angst.
Warnings: Depression. Implied sex.
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Uruha/Reita, Reita/Ruki, Uruha/Aoi, Kai/Ruki.
Synopsis: Uruha leaves too early and Reita stays put too long.
Comments: To make up for the lack of Chapter Two of SKYDIVE. OTL.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: Long story short, I

Comments

[k435y]

. . . *stares at screen for several seconds* o_o
Well, that was a whirlwind of confusion. O_O But~ They're back together. XD Random: Man, I hate relationships that break you and then builds you up again only to break you again. >___<;; But~ I loved when it was like a whole year already and Uru tells him that he wasn't lying and then texts him saying that he'd still give him his world. Made me all: eagrpitujr;niuogjkmea!! 8D (I don't know how to explain in actual words, sorry. XD)
Anyway, thank you for sharing. =D

[raindigo]

ARGH I KNEW IT XD I will NEVER write fics while half-dead (SCHOOL I HATE YOU SO.../kills french teacher afdl;skgj).

Gosh. I reread this once awake and. *goes to drown self in sink*

Thank you for reading <3 ;-;

[k435y]

O_O! *pulls you back from the sink* Don't go doing that.
I still want more UruxRei. LOL.
You're writing is very good. I just felt that those were some very strong emotions packed up into one one-shot. So...at first I was all sad, sad, sad...and then BOOM! I'm so happy I could burst at the end. And I meant that their relationship was a whirlwind of confusion. XD
...Yeah, words aren't my thing. LOL.

[raindigo]

YES. URUXREI. I will live for that purpose.

Whirlwind is the way to describe it 8D

MINE EITHER. OTL. I tend to overreact. Excuse my shameless stupidity.

[a9sims]

WAHHHH...this story is so complicated. Update soon so I can better understand this ok? Hahaha...don't get me wrong though, I enjoyed this chapter.

[raindigo]

Aaaaaaaaaah It's a oneshot. .__________.

But super glad you enjoyed 8D

[bauci]

You could benefit from having a beta. But there are so many nicely worded sentences here and genuine emotion. Altogether they tip the scale into me being glad I clicked on the link. Thank you for sharing.

[raindigo]

ASDFGHJKL BETA. I've been thinking about it, really. Because I know I make the dumbest errors ever and have to edit like five hundred times after I reread xD

Thank you for reading!~ And I tried putting emotion into it. I just didn't succeed. I know I have problems expressing myself asdkjs;afjd;. T________T

[bauci]

You're good with emotions, that was my point. You have a style that imo is like... inner speech, thoughts right after another and not necessarily in a way that follow a logical pattern (which is how people do think most of the time). But for a story there needs to be some restraint, which a good beta will enforce on you. And the tenses and 'your you're your's' etc.
You remind me of me, which is why I'll cheer you on (in addition of being a total Reita/Uruha stan). But do try to find a good beta, it'll let your stories grow faster.

[raindigo]

Ugh, my emotions run rampant all the time. I don't have a firm hold on them. I feel like crying at every little thing. That's mainly the reason why I don't think I can capture emotions right. There's always like this little something off-key.

TENSES. YES, TENSES. *headsmash* English is not my mother language even though I've learned to master it better than I do Chinese, but I live in a place where French is the official language. And while juggling between the two I've realized I have this same problem with both: TENSES.

OMG I FOUND A PARTNER 8D And thank you SO SO SO SO SO MUCH for the tips and criticism. It's mainly the reason why I made a Livejournal; because of the communities, more people tend to read your work and give their opinion. On DevArt, unless you're crazy famous or crazy talented, you don't get so many comments and criticism.

<3 THANK YOU AGAIN.

[ext_332643]

aaah it took me a while to understaand~ @-@
but ur sentences are great looool :P

[raindigo]

...

STOP.

SRSLY. STOP STOP STOP STOP STOP!

HOW CAN WE PREVENT SOMEONE FROM COMMENTIIIIIIIING?!?!?!?!

GTFO MY LIVEJOURNAAAAAAAAL HUAFFLE.

[raindigo]

OMG. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU :0

Do you know how much readers' opinions mean to me? I'm so glad you liked this. I'm so glad I made you happeh inside 8D~

LOL, I dunno, but I love all Gazette members. <3 They have their... charming points, I guess? /fail.

OMG. *gives you kleenex* Umm, I dunno, am I supposed to rejoice at this? xD I love moving ppl inside <33 I think that's the goal of my writing. I dunno why, the fics I love most are those that make me cry of joy in the end. xD

PHONES. Don't you just love phones and 2 AM? I do that ALL THE TIME. As in check fics on my phone at 2 AM. XD

Take care as well and thanks again <33 I can't thank you enough 8D

[raindigo]

Ururei is awesomeness defined 8D

It's okay, sometimes I get annoyed at the other band members too, when they're getting in the way of Ururei /smashed.

Lol, sadly I don't have internet anymoarz D: Just WiFi and the connection always cuts. >.<