This was really amazing. I love writing things where you look back and wonder where the hell it came from, but I've never written something qutie as beautiful as this.
it's so patchwork, and filled with lovely metaphors. the words and phrases are all twisted and delightful to read.
Thank you :) Oh, I do too. The reaction I usually get is: "...Did I really write that?" Haha, I've been writing for a long time, I'm sure anyone can get to this level with a bit of practice.
I love patchwork, hehe, I really wanted that feelling of different cases clicking together. Metaphors are my only forte, I'm afraid.
WOW... okay this is like so beautiful, its so touching and in its puzzling way its so true and WOW, lol this is amazing, i know everybody gets there own understanding of this but what i got out of it was so true because there is someone out there that i feel the same way for. we were best friends adn one day he moved and then i moved and i feel like he left me just like this haha, and just recently i got a hold of him and he's changed so much and it sucks because i feel like i can't even talk to him anymore ): but this was AWESOME, you're an amzing writer! (goes off to read more of you're writings) (:
Aww, comments like yours really make my day :') I'm touched that you can relate to this. I didn't see any reality, at first, because it was so abstract, but then again if you take it to the second degree, it's like someone slowly slipping away. I feel for you and your friend ): I know how it's like. Personal experience, I guess.
Thank you~ :D I hope next time I can write uou something that will leave you with a smile. :)
I'm glad i could make your day and trust me this did make me smile because even though were not close anymore the friendship we had back then was more than enough to leave me happy with what we are now , if that makes since :)
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Personally I wasn't even quite aware of what I wrote xD And when I reread I was like: "Shit this thing is so damn weird." But glad you liked it <3333
*hands kleenex*
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:D I do hope I won't disappoint.
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it's so patchwork, and filled with lovely metaphors. the words and phrases are all twisted and delightful to read.
thanks for sharing~
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I love patchwork, hehe, I really wanted that feelling of different cases clicking together. Metaphors are my only forte, I'm afraid.
Thank YOU for commenting :)
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Thank you~ :D I hope next time I can write uou something that will leave you with a smile. :)
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Because sometimes life doesn't give you second chances, or sometimes it does too late D:
I'm glad you could become friends again :) What I'd give to say the same. *siiiiiiiiiiigh*
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