Comments | raindigo: the road to nameless liberty: chapter one

raindigo

the road to nameless liberty: chapter one

Oct 13, 2012 21:03

a/n: wow so this is way shorter than i'd anticipated but i didn't want to write the first kouyou-akira confrontation right away /chickens out because i'm a coward so here have this uh idek what it is feel free to pelt me with rocks and unicorns
( “Besides being utterly boring and useless,” Takanori chirps over the invisible yet certainly nauseous stink of nail polish fumes, “what makes your math assignment more attractive than moi?” )

highschool, fanfiction, the gazette, uruha/reita

Comments 13

k435y October 15 2012, 03:48:59 UTC

poor kira. D8 kou does have an intimidating face sometimes. lol. & if he can still remember kiras body s er shape then there is still hope! 8D takas such an adorable dirty birdy. lol. please update soon? =)

raindigo October 15 2012, 23:27:00 UTC

hahahaha i was trying to incorporate uruha's trademark "sometimes silently grins and it makes ppl uncomfortable" c:
yes there is still hope, there is always hope!!! :D
omg but i'm so sorry i'm in the middle of midterms right now!! as soon as the week is over i'll try to churn something out 8)

k435y October 16 2012, 00:48:04 UTC

gah! i hate replying by phone too. D8 its all stupid laptops fault! anyway...its no rush. XD good luck with exams. =)

raindigo October 18 2012, 23:40:02 UTC

thank you!!! actually exams are over LOL and i've started writing ch.2 :D

dontfallthrough October 15 2012, 15:32:48 UTC

I really like it so far :) I feel sad about the way Akira doesn't seem to be doing so well.
I love Taka in this fic, natural disaster, that sounds about right ^^
Looking forward to whats going to happen ;)

raindigo October 15 2012, 23:28:38 UTC

Thanks for reading! And yeah, there is totally a backstory for Rei's negative reactions towards Uru :-) Although it might make you wanna beat Kou up when you hear it /OTL
Haha, I like giving Ruki the whole crazy beyond cure persona (-; I think he'd make quite the extravagant teenager.

dontfallthrough October 16 2012, 10:37:28 UTC

I can't wait to find out :)
I might beat Kou up, but I couldn't hurt his face, there's to much perfection stored there ;)

raindigo October 18 2012, 23:39:26 UTC

ttly agreed the man is made of perfect

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raindigo October 15 2012, 23:29:34 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!!! x)
And yes i am so looking forward to the kai/aoi adfjldsklfjsdf they'll at least bring some goofy to contrast with ururei's gloomy nature right now.

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raindigo October 18 2012, 23:38:27 UTC

omgg i'm really glad you like it :)) my headcanon for teen!ruki is borderline insane c:

also yes i believe uruha suffered from chronic bitch face before he learned to just eerily grin while ppl talk to him :-P

daaniiie October 20 2012, 00:49:24 UTC

Hello again! ^^.
I need to say... I love your characters. Especially Sana and Taka, I think. They're priceless <3
Kouyou is a hell of a character as well and I love him but I'm not sure if that is because of the actual character so... yeah.
I feel kinda sorry for Yutaka, btw, cause dealing with both Taka and Kou... it is not easy, man. Not easy. xD
I really like the fact that Kouyou is this cold shameless bastard. A lot of fanfictions have him being the innocent and cute type or just the introverted one. So I really appreciate the personality you gave him here cause it's diferent (and, if you ask me, closer to his true personality. yeah, he's a bitch. which is why i love hi-- okay, this makes no sense).
I'm really curious about how it is going to work out with Akira. So... yeah, I'll be waiting zD

"I have a doctor’s slip that officially recognizes I have self-destructive tendencies" - This is genius and I'll keep it in mind, thanks, bye xD

daaniiie October 20 2012, 00:54:24 UTC

I write a lot, I'm sorry (not that I actually regret it) xD
Btw, I forgot to say it, but I loved the chronic bitch face thing too. And I could perfectly imagine Kouyou "practicing how to smile under pressure without looking like a serial killer"... and it was hilarious. xD

raindigo October 20 2012, 01:16:38 UTC

omg wow no don't apologize long comments make me smile holy cow reading through this i must have had the weirdest expression of glee on my face i couldn't stop grinning ( ... )