I really liked the way you set the scene right from the beginning: Dusk is an odd time, isn’t it? The birth of night, where city lamps ignite one by one, where every object takes on a blueish tone. Where the puddles in the city streets reflect the lights off of passing cars and busses. And at such an odd time, and on such an unassuming day, anything can happen.
I can't imagine how difficult it would have been for the Doctor to see Rose in a relationship with another version of himself. As long as she was happy though, I am sure he would not interfere. I like your 'meet cute' scene. The Doctor would never pressure her to choose.
Your love scene between the Doctor and Rose was pretty hot. I liked this part the best: Last night was a blur, between the time they fallen on his couch to the time where they had practically ripped their clothes to shreds off their bodies, was a glorious and colour smear on canvas… I chuckled a bit at the image of the Doctor making Rose pancakes. I am sure domestics with Rose would be more like a dream
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Yep, Nine was the Doctor who craved domestics even though he never said it out loud. I wanted to portray that as much as possible in this fic series. When Nine finds the TARDIS, there's going to be a part of him that's going to miss linear time.
Heh, and with Nine planning to take Rose on a two month vacation to Hawaii, things are going to get much more passionate.
Nine would have loved to do all those little things for Rose to make her life more comfortable. Now that their true feelings are out in the open, he would be able to express everything he feels for her. My head canon is Nine giving Rose a foot massage after every adventure he makes her run for her life.
A 2 month vacation in Hawaii! That is my kind of man. Lucky Rose and the Doctor. I am sure they would be that one couple that would make everyone uncomfortable with their constant Public Displays of Affection ;)
I can imagine sooo much surprise groping from the both of them! -laughs- But actually, Nine and Rose are going to be staying in a very private summer home in Hawaii. And the parts where they are in Hawaii are going to be drawn out, I want this fic series to have a very relaxed pace to it. Something Nine and Rose never had the luxury of in their season.
This was wonderful. You create such a gorgeous scene and the idea of the (maybe not quite so) random meeting was just right.
I think you've definitely got Nine just right, his main concern was always just that Rose is happy. Even if it wasn't with him. Probably part of what made Rose love him so damn much.
And I'm with bloose, the image of him making pancakes was rather adorable :)
I can't help but smile at the image of Nine cooking in the kitchen, making tea for Rose. To me, those kinds of gestures are far more romantic than fancy outings to swanky and trendy restaurants.
Nine and Rose gettin' all cuddly over breakfast, just revelling in the afterglow of sex.
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Dusk is an odd time, isn’t it? The birth of night, where city lamps ignite one by one, where every object takes on a blueish tone. Where the puddles in the city streets reflect the lights off of passing cars and busses. And at such an odd time, and on such an unassuming day, anything can happen.
I can't imagine how difficult it would have been for the Doctor to see Rose in a relationship with another version of himself. As long as she was happy though, I am sure he would not interfere. I like your 'meet cute' scene. The Doctor would never pressure her to choose.
Your love scene between the Doctor and Rose was pretty hot. I liked this part the best:
Last night was a blur, between the time they fallen on his couch to the time where they had practically ripped their clothes to shreds off their bodies, was a glorious and colour smear on canvas… I chuckled a bit at the image of the Doctor making Rose pancakes. I am sure domestics with Rose would be more like a dream ( ... )
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Heh, and with Nine planning to take Rose on a two month vacation to Hawaii, things are going to get much more passionate.
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A 2 month vacation in Hawaii! That is my kind of man. Lucky Rose and the Doctor. I am sure they would be that one couple that would make everyone uncomfortable with their constant Public Displays of Affection ;)
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But actually, Nine and Rose are going to be staying in a very private summer home in Hawaii.
And the parts where they are in Hawaii are going to be drawn out, I want this fic series to have a very relaxed pace to it. Something Nine and Rose never had the luxury of in their season.
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I think you've definitely got Nine just right, his main concern was always just that Rose is happy. Even if it wasn't with him. Probably part of what made Rose love him so damn much.
And I'm with bloose, the image of him making pancakes was rather adorable :)
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Nine and Rose gettin' all cuddly over breakfast, just revelling in the afterglow of sex.
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