Mist and Fog - Moaning After

[raine_seraphim]

Title - Mist and Fog

Type - Original Story

Genre - Supernatural/Fantasy/Romance

Rating - NC-17

Summary - Maria Sloane wakes up after her night of extreme passion, will Nytherian be there when she wakes up, or will he be nothing more than a wishful dream?

Comments

[bloose09]

This part was even better than the last. I love the world you have woven here. The demon who lives to give pleasure, yet leaves no memory imprint on his host. I wonder if Maria will consciously become satisfied. How long will she desire her demon? How does he interact within the rest of her reality? Does he only exist for her, or can he be seen by others?

So many questions! That is a mark of a good story, when the reader is left wanting more. I think you have excelled with this story. It is one of your best!

[raine_seraphim]

Yes, more things shall be revealed today. This story thread is really charging me up! I love stories like this one. In this part, we're gonna get some more information on Nytherian's other abilities.
Nytherian is capable of being seen by other people. He's not a ghost.
The next part is from Nytherian's perspective. I'm thinking of having it switch every now and then.