roomy reason

[raining_helium]

rating/genre: PG, drama, romance, slight angst
pairing(s): Ohmiya
words: 1150
summary: Ohno steals clothes pegs. Nino tries not to think about socks too much.
disclaimer: fiction.
notes: More prose than flash fiction.

the fugitive and the liar

Comments

[neenashareefa]

Ohmiya a day... thank you dear...

[raining_helium]

Thanks for reading :)

[morninglights]

Woah, there is so much in there and I would just copy every single line if I wanted to tell you which part I loved the most, but see, there would be no point in that right?
It's just-- God, I loved this. I loved this so much and I love you for having such an awesome mind to write fic like that. I really do.

But I just have to at least quote one bit, because it just- it got me.

It is the constancy of this merry-go-round of nothing and then everything and then a lap of excuses that has Nino running and hiding like a newly escaped fugitive. Because the cycle just keeps going like clockwork and clocks don't tend to stop until years pass. But they stop. Eventually. So Nino runs.

But the whole fic got me, that is. And this definitely needs lots of re-reads to fully grasp everything what's in there and even then I'm not sure I would be able to really find everything. It's so good.

I'm sorry that I can't say more, I'd love to, but your story and your writing just did things to me. Especially your writing. It's so beautiful. I'm in

[raining_helium]

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this - I didn't try to think too hard about making a tight plot or anything like that, so I know this fic style isn't for everyone. It's good it worked for you :) and I feel all fuzzy inside that you actually quoted the part you liked the most ♥ For this story, I felt that Nino's not really afraid of commitment per say, but just the way even the most solid relationships, let alone his dysfunctional one, have their endings.

I hope it stands up to further re-readings :O

I'm just happy that you read and got something out of it :) My writing (and myself) accept your love with open arms ♥ you're a wonderful reader.

Thanks for reading!!

[senna23]

Wow. This is good and being an amateur reader that I am, I would have to read this again. Thank you! :)

[raining_helium]

Aw, thanks for reading! Hope it hold up during the second read :)