Knives Don't Have Your Back: Chapter IX

[rainjewel]

Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood
Rated: NC17 (NC17 overall)
Word Count: 4,325 / 90,339

Knives Don't Have Your Back

Comments

[bionic]

How very freaking lovely and hot was that?!! I am so utterly charmed by these men, these terrible bad men! Love the end when Teodor finally gets a smile and a laugh out of Malfatto. LOVIN IT <3

[rainjewel]

YAY. I was such a stress case writing this chapter. I sat down to have Teodor eat breakfast and weird mask sex ensued. My brain, I don't even...

Thanks for your kind words! I love that you find these terrible men as charming as I do!

[stumphed]

Three extraordinary things happened after that. There was a pause before Malfatto responded, and Teodor watched a slow blush spread across Malfatto’s fair complexion. That was the first. He made a note to make it his personal mission to have Malfatto do that more often.

“I-” Malfatto said, then stopped. The second thing came in the form of a slightly impish smile that nearly made Teodor’s heart stop. “Yes. Yes I was.”

And then Malfatto laughed.

Seriously my favourite thing you have EVER written.

[rainjewel]

YOU ARE MY FAVORITE THING.

[natong]

wtf only 2 comments..!?!?!?!?

this is seriously one of the hottest things i've read in a while.
i love your portrayal of Malfatto,really.
i find him rather adorable now...

and thank you for making Teodor speak French while having sex..
that was way too sexy for my brain to take and i sort of shut down for a moment or two...:'D

[rainjewel]

Aww, I'm glad you like Malfatto! I was worried people who loved Malfatto weren't going to enjoy my version of him. I've seen a lot of versions where he's portrayed as the barbaric serial killer, where he is totally and completely unhinged and evil, but I wanted to do something a little different. I think it's too easy to play him as a total psychopath. It's more interesting if he's a little off, a little creepy, but definitely still human.

ANYWAY, I'm soapboxing. Thank you for reading!

[rebbawskaced]

I started reading this at work, and thankfully I managed to make it home before this chapter, because HOLY CRAP. That was one of the most awesome...just breathtaking scenes yet! I don't even know what to say about how impressed I am with your writing. I have done nothing but read this story since I found it, and I don't want to stop!

You are an amazing story teller and your characterization is enthralling. I hope you keep writing more amazing stories like this. I'm signed up for life!!!

*goes to the next chapter*