Fic Exchange for Three Keys

Oct 19, 2008 14:00

Hello People, I know I hardly ever use this medium but here I am. I wrote the following piece for a fic exchange for Dyonugget and because of personal reasons the mods were unable to post it. Anyhow here it is, hope you like it :)

Title: Pushing the Envelope
Written For: Dyonugget
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Lucius/Hermione
Disclaimer: Characters ( Read more... )

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dynonugget November 1 2008, 14:08:55 UTC
I'm sorry it took me so long to review this, first of all! Please accept my apologies.

This was both humorous and effing HOT! I LOVE how you have them both clawing at each other, desperate for relief that only the other can bring. Lucius using spells to pleasure Hermione was definitely funny - I'm sure he didn't need them, but watching her writhe with pleasure before he even touched her must have really turned him on!

I love how at the end, they are both a complete mess, though happily sated, and I like how you left it, too, with the knowledge there will be much more!

Great story!!

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sweettiff_14 November 1 2008, 17:18:43 UTC
bwahaha... Naughty Lucius, using illegal spells. I'm sure he didn't need them though. I like how Hermione gave him a taste of his own medicine. Kinda.

Great story! Dyno is a lucky girl!

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partie_carree November 1 2008, 17:36:34 UTC
dynonugget sent me over here to read this hot little bit of lumione, and I must tell her 'thank you'! This was so hot, and the final scene with them going at each other like animals was very funny. I will carry the picture of a mussed up Lucius, leaves in his hair, in my imagination for a long time. This story is begging to be continued!

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eloquentquill November 1 2008, 18:10:02 UTC
I loved this! Very nicely done! :D I would loved for Severus to walk in while they were fucking on his desk, lol. That would have been like icing on the cake.

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ilkee November 2 2008, 01:21:59 UTC
Good lord! An addictive sex spell? AWESOME! That should lead to a gazillion hot and crazy encounters between these volatile two! Great characterizations too! Love it!

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