We'll see if this works

[rainwaker]

I wrote a short story for an assignment a while ago, in the style of Jorge Borges. Read it, if you have the time, it's the best fiction I've ever written by far. Writing wise, at least. And then tell me what you think. But don't give me any crap about the lack of detail or dialogue, because that's how Jorge Borges writes.

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[rainwaker]

Better?

[theravenflower]

:)

[rainwaker]

eeeeeee

[magic_tree]

2p backward, no s. 5p 2s semicolon not comma. That's where I stopped, I'm bloody tired. The change I noticed works. Still amazing. Really. Goodnight.