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[rainydayromance]

he's crushing me. slowly, softly, delicately.
a subtle assassin of heartbreak.
a listless lover who's never felt love.
i want to be him. deadened to every sense of pain.
"inflict your wounds, killer! because i'll never feel again." 
it was over before it began.
a nighttime romance
destroyed by the onslaught of the morning sun.
when all that's left are

Comments

[reasontohate]

i like it.

but personally i think you need to lighten up darling, you always sound so sad. that might just be because i catch you on bad days. i have my bad days as well.

i like the line in quotes, it really catches your eye.

<3

[rainydayromance]

i write about life.
& life is sad.

[disarm]

i really like this.
im a little confused on the last line, but sometimes thats good.
i think you should submit it to excelior :)

[rainydayromance]

"i had the world in my hands and i let him slip away"
meaning he was my world.

[disarm]

:)
ir reminded me of that growing pains theme song, remember that? "we've got the world spinning right in our hands.."

i cant believe i spelled excelsior wrong. >.

[jonithand666]

two thumbs up