The Adventure of the Civil Partnership Chapter 10 Pins

[rairakku1234]

Sherlock and John are hunting a kidnapper who has been taking newlywed couples across the Greater London Area and Sherlock has the perfect way to flush him out. Warning: Pre-Slash/Slash of Sherlock/John Work in Progress - Very Slow Updates

Comments

[shadowturquoise]

Great chapter! The bowling experience is about how I expected and very entertaining to read. I'm very curious to see what Mycroft's motives are, although I do have a theory.

Hahahaha

[rairakku1234]

What Mycroft can't just want to help his brother-in-law? hhehehehehe.

I am really glad that you enjoyed the bowling. It was fun to write.

Thanks for the great review,
Rairakku

[jademac2442]

Oh that's so lovely. Mycroft knows their relationship is real. I look forward to every update of this fiction, and then I try to read them super slow, so they don't go by as quickly.

Hehehehe

[rairakku1234]

That is a great thing to say. I am really glad you are enjoying the story that much.

Thanks for a great review,
Rairakku

[laurtew]

I did the happy dance when I saw an update. I am adoring this story. (The details you put in are amazing.) I loved the idea of Sherlock bowling. (And I have that same problem with the wrist twist.) I also couldn't stop smiling when John figured out a way to sneak in a kiss. And yay to Mycroft for being nice! Can't wait to see where this goes!

Thank you

[rairakku1234]

It's great to hear that I can make someone dance for fun. I am also really glad you enjoyed all the details and also Sherlock bowling. Poor John he needed to get something for everything he has been through, don't you think? hehhehe

Thanks again for a great review,
Rairakku

[tiffy190706]

so happy you updated. i was looking forward to it... and checked every day especially looking for this story.
and as all the last chapters i enjoyed this as much. i love the image of sherlock working in his mind palace, and john's point of view when sherlock is greeting him... i am not sure i can describe it very good, but the disembodied arm sneeking around john and the kiss on his temple was such a heart warming thing...
it is such a fantastic ride where you show domestic things like bowling ,that can be a little boring in fluffy fanfiction, as a part of a case...
i adore it when sherlock is considerate to john's feelings...

:)

[rairakku1234]

I am really glad that you are enjoying the imagry in the chapter. I had a lot of fun writing the scenes in this one becuase ther is so much going on.

Thanks again for a great review,
Rairakku

[talimenios79]

This story is just so wonderful. I adore it.

Thank you

[rairakku1234]

I am really glad you are enjoying the story.

Thanks for a great review,
Rairakku