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rairakku1234

The Adventure of the Civil Partnership Chapter 2 With This Ring

Mar 12, 2012 10:14

Sherlock and John are hunting a kidnapper who has been taking newlywed couples across the Greater London Area and Sherlock has the perfect way to flush him out. Warning: Pre-Slash/Slash of Sherlock/John Work in Progress - Very Slow Updates

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sherlock/john, case fic, sherlock bbc, civilpartnership, slash

Comments 15

kassy2 March 19 2012, 19:23:26 UTC

Loving this. I do think you are a weensy bit unfair to Mrs Hudson- she is old enough to be Sherlocks mother, but not his grandmother!!!

Thank you rairakku1234 March 19 2012, 23:14:19 UTC

I am so glad you are enjoying this. The referance to Mrs. Hudson was meant to be more about emotions and feelings than age. I didn't go with mother on purpose becuase he obviously already has a mother he loves.

Thanks again for comenting,
Rairakku

nathcoelho March 20 2012, 15:16:36 UTC

omg! John has his heart up in his sleeve!! poor him!
love this chapter
really great

RE: The Adventure of the Civil Partnership Chapter 2 With This Ring disassembly_rsn October 7 2012, 23:08:06 UTC

Never mind, idiotic question, of course he did.
:) That makes perfect sense. Nicely played - Mycroft got to upgrade John's suit to his personal standard, got rid of the old eyesore, and planted bugs at the same time. I wouldn't bet that Sherlock found them all, either - good that Sherlock also thought of that. :)

And naturally it's easier to get calories into Sherlock if he can steal them off somebody. :)

witness-come-best manShould use 'cum', the Latin for 'with', although it's pronounced as you spelled it here ( ... )

Re: The Adventure of the Civil Partnership Chapter 2 With This Ring rairakku1234 October 7 2012, 23:33:02 UTC

Hahahahaha. Again another wonderful review. I am so glad that you enjoyed Mrs. Hudson's reaction in this chapter. It was a blast to write her reaction to the marriage.

I am really glad that you and so many other readers enjoyed Mycroft's 'gift'. I threw it in to make a joke about controling Mycroft, didn't even put a huge amount of thought into it and it has gotten a huge response.

The ring kiss was one of those scenes I had in my head that I knew I wanted to get in when I started this story. It's good to hear other people like it as much as I do.

Thanks for another wonderful review.

Rairakku