Crit Post

[raisedbyacat]

If you have any suggestions, complaints, or... well anything you want to say, feel free to say it here.

Comments

[godisachild]

Hey there. I'm James, and I play Pokey Minch, who'll be the next person hunting Vayne down. As he's managed to kill his first opponent, he's managed to regain his spider mech. Which currently doesn't have any weapons since those'd be extra regains, but it can still smash and crush crap really good.

As for Pokey himself, his right shoulder is broken, and he's feeling guilty about having killed someone for the first time, which has taken him off guard and confused the hell out of him.

So. Wanna plot how this might go down?

[raisedbyacat]

Oh yes! Vayne is... well, he's really an easy target. The most he's doing is sticking to Flay at home and hoping everything ends soon.

[godisachild]

Which isn't going to help Pokey's conviction at all. Which'll further confuse him, considering how vicious and heartless he'd like to pretend he is.

So I guess we should decide if it actually ends with either dying.

[raisedbyacat]

I don't mind Vayne dying, logically it would make sense as he has no means of defending himself or fight. I think it would depend on how Flay may react on what might happen to Pokey.