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Sep 30, 2009 17:55

title: when things are different (and so we start over)
author: chartre
rating: pg-13
pairing: jiyong/seungri
summary: he just brushed through the hallway and swung the door open just like that and now he’s staring at his back, his clavicles, all smooth and white and maknae-like.
notes: fiction. my first big bang fic, spare me! \o/ somewhat a leader-and- ( Read more... )

big bang, jiyong/seungri, oneshot, fail

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reuslurid October 1 2009, 14:00:05 UTC
\0/ <-- sexy head

Sorry I took such a long time. I had to keep re-reading because the tv's so loud!

OMGOSSSSH ♥ It "works". I usually kinda gravitate away from sick-person themes but this otally works! Not the cheesy kinda romance between them at all! Which is nice to find. One more sexy head for you. :>

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For some twisted reason, RoyHavoc flashed in my head here. OF ALL THINGS!

“What’s going to happen to us, hyung? To Big Bang? To Seungri, what’s going to happen to him now?” Taeyang asks, but no one answers him; no one wants to because no one knows.

“I don’t know, hyung. I don’t know.”

Totally imagined this bit. :'(

“Sorry,” he says and rests his hands on the upper side of the wheels. “I just want to do this myself.”

“And then what?” Jiyong mutters, a little more remorseful about where this is going. He pauses. “Sorry, I’m-”

“It’s okay, I should…” Seungri looks away and tries to spin his weight on the wheelchair; while Jiyong watches with disgust (he has never imagined seeing him like this) in the silence.UGHH I love ( ... )

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chartre October 1 2009, 15:23:43 UTC
ILUSM, that is all. :D ♥ I hope to get more sexy heads in my next fics \o/ (I use the tiny head, ROFL!)

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blushemphasises October 2 2009, 07:52:32 UTC
Wow. I really, really loved this :D
it was so touching, and it was so well written that the words just flowed~
Great job! hope you write more G-ri ^^

p.s THANKYOU for the happy ending. i seriously wouldve cried forever if there wasnt one! haha

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chartre October 2 2009, 09:38:07 UTC
aww~ thank you very much! XD and you're welcome! i didn't intend for this fic to be a tear-jerker but i'll take the near-to-tears comment as a compliment. :')

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xxasianicexx December 11 2009, 08:24:58 UTC
beautiful fic. it was special. hit me in the heart.

thankyou so much! =]

dont want to undermine the meaning of your fic with my babbling so, again, thankyou.

*adds to memories*

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papersanguine January 30 2010, 05:39:16 UTC
That was sooooooo good! It was amazing!!!

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