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ralkana

New Leverage Fic

May 22, 2010 21:19

Here goes... my first foray into Leverage fic. It's all genfic -- no pairings. Let me know what you think!

Cross-Training ~ How exactly did it happen that Eliot learned 'that Photoshop thing'? A missing scene from The Wedding Job. Rated light R for language.

Crossing Paths: Eliot's Path ~ A chance encounter stirs up things that are probably ( Read more... )

fic:leverage, fandom:leverage

Comments 23

die_oatmeal May 23 2010, 21:57:48 UTC

Loved these! Especially the crossover between Bones and Leverage. You should totally write more crossovers, you're so great at them!

ralkana May 24 2010, 07:42:48 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed them! The crossover was fun to write. I kept going, "Ooh, I have to add that. And that. Ooh, and that!"

I go where the muse takes me. I'm really enjoying this fandom though, so hopefully she'll give me more!

scout_lover May 24 2010, 04:39:10 UTC

Not done reading yet, but I wanted to say I loved your drabbles! Such wonderful little insights into Eliot.

Had to laugh at Hardison's Ferrari. Poor baby … *snicker*

And, yeah, I wanted Eliot to kill Rand, too. Bastard made Parker cry, he deserves a beat down. Grrr …

ralkana May 24 2010, 07:50:23 UTC

Thank you so much! I love drabbles, and I feel they often get shortchanged. They're such a test of discipline, and you can say so much with them!

I loved Eliot's reaction when she wanted to make Rand dead. If Parker had decided Nate's plan wasn't enough, he totally would've followed through, too!

And as soon as I saw what happened in the Ice Man Job, I knew that car was toast. No way he got it back!

Thanks again for your feedback!

tigriswolf May 31 2010, 04:26:01 UTC

I really enjoyed the Bones/Leverage crossover.

ralkana June 8 2010, 14:31:25 UTC

Hi! Not sure what happened to my notification for this comment, so I'm sorry it took so long for me to reply. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!

maquisleader June 25 2010, 02:05:29 UTC

Fun stuff!

ralkana June 30 2010, 01:50:38 UTC

Thanks, liege! *g*

longbca June 29 2010, 09:58:35 UTC

The Eliot/Booth stories were great. I liked the vulnerable side to Eliot. Also I liked how Booth was having difficulties too...and how both didnt remember their past. The whole time I was reading my mind was throwing slash at the plot- this is a good thing from me because it means I was really enjoying the story. I kept picturing Angel and Lindsay knowing who they were and Lindsay somehow been Angel's mate and then ducking by a corner to make out...strange I know...Angel even called him sweetheart in my mind. Maybe write something from's the team's POV...

Hardison having to clean the truck out was great! I could totally see Eliot forcing him to do that- there is no way he would have gotten out of cleaning that truck! Brilliant!

ralkana June 30 2010, 01:57:36 UTC

Thanks for your feedback, I'm glad you liked them!

I liked the vulnerable side to Eliot.

Eliot thrives on control, I think. Especially self-control. As such, something like this, where he has absolutely no idea WTF is going on, would totally throw him. There's nothing to punch when it's your own mind that's screwing with you, y'know?

I might do team-POV chapters. See even more sides of the story. Although they wouldn't have the nifty flashbacks...

Eliot shouldn't have had to bully Hardison into doing that, but he totally would have if he had to.

Hardison's smart, though. I didn't write the part where Hardison hotwires the truck, drives it to the local car wash, pays someone else to wash it, (tips really well beforehand to avoid scratches that would get him killed by Eliot), and then idly hacks into the bank next door's mainframe on his phone while he's waiting for them to finish.

But I imagined it. *g*