FF: Auspicious Beginnings

May 29, 2008 23:17

Fandom: Murder in Suburbia
Pairing: Pre-relationship Ash/Scribbs
A/N: I thought I should try out the table of prompts idea. This is very short.

001. Beginnings )

murder in suburbia

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zennie May 30 2008, 01:15:51 UTC
Awww, wonderful wonderful start. And since it's so short, I guess we'll have the next part tomorrow.

"I never was that good at physics," she mumbled, her hands dabbing closer and closer to areas not normally reached before a third date.

And Scribbs getting fresh before she even learns her new DIs name? Fabulous. And of course Ash would think to enforce the rules about who can and cannot be in the police loo!

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ralst May 30 2008, 11:02:29 UTC
Next part? Maybe a next prompt. We'll see.

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loridragus May 30 2008, 01:55:17 UTC
Just what I needed today. As I sit in a empty parking lot explaining to people why all the shops are closed.

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ralst May 30 2008, 11:03:48 UTC
Couldn't you just tape off the shops with big warning signs hinting at the presence of noxious chemicals and Godzilla's cranky younger sister?

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loridragus May 30 2008, 15:50:56 UTC
I wish. That sounded like a better explanation than the one I gave.

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the_girl_20 May 30 2008, 21:15:59 UTC
This was v cute. Love the thought of Scribbs dabbing at Ash's...er, skirt immediately after meeting her.

Looking forward to reading the result of more prompts.

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ralst May 31 2008, 11:45:23 UTC
Scribbs never seemed one to let the grass grow under her feet *g*

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copracat May 31 2008, 15:46:40 UTC
Poor Ash! Scribbs has only just begun to storm her life.

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E&A orA&E rosenknop December 12 2008, 21:09:19 UTC
Short sharp and succint. How cute can one get. I can just picture the scene and the story unfolding. I am a total novice at this stuff but i love a good story and do enjoy femslash. Makes a change from my normal diet of murder and mayhem.

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