[Multi-chapter] What am I to you? ... Chapter 4

Jan 08, 2010 15:07


Title: What am I to you? …. Chapter 4
Pairing: RyoDa, JinDa, TegoPi
Rating: PG for bad language
Genre: Romance, drama, smut, fluff
Length: 3786 words
Disclaimer: I love JE-boys but unless I can get one of them for Christmas this year, I don't own any of them.
Summary: For a long time Tatsuya had a pretty decent life. She was from a fairly rich family, ( Read more... )

pairing: yamashita tomohisa/tegoshi yuya, multichapter, rating: pg, pairing: nishikido ryo/ueda tatsuya, fanfics, pairing: akanishi jin/ueda tatsuya

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ramadiii January 8 2010, 14:08:11 UTC
1:st spot for Jindaluver <3

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jindaluver January 8 2010, 15:18:30 UTC
Wow!!This is so fast!An update already and i'm looooving it!!
The only thing that i hate now is Akanishi Jin!!But i really hope that won't be too long,onegai?? *_*

But to tell the truth i hate ryo more than jin, i mean he didn't even try to trust tatsuya,he can't be that stupid to trust Jin,his enemy for God's sake?haven't he heard of photoshop before?daa??~~

hehe..the boxing scene reminds me of one pound gospel :p
but i'm glad that tatsuya will soon learn to protect herself with boxing,she won't need any of ryo or jin anymore to protect her.Screw those guys!arrgh,my muse to hate guys are back :p

great update,but sorry a very long comment ne,can't help myself~~ :ppppp
well,love it like usual and i'll be waiting more for you~~~
*hugs and kisses*

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ramadiii January 11 2010, 13:51:48 UTC
Hehe, I tend to write fast when the story has grown into my head xD It's a really fun story to write and I'm so thrilled you like it <3

The hating won't go on for too long, you might even start to like them again soon ;)
Jin however needs a realitycheck and Ryo needs to do something about his jealousy but other than that they are two really cool guys, ne? xD

I was sorta thinking about 1 pound gospel and Kame for this chapter but in the end I decided not to get another "known" character into the story, takes the focus off of Tatsuya I feel :P

It's my pleasure to be your guy-hating-muse but they really aren't that bad ;)
Thank you so much for the long comment (makes me so happy to read), your liking (which is SO important to me) and your loving!!!
Couldn't manage without it <3
So thanks once again!

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ramadiii January 8 2010, 14:08:27 UTC
2:nd spot for Miru-chan <3

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miruiki January 8 2010, 14:32:47 UTC
I HATE YOU AKANISHI JIN. I MEAN SERIOUSLY.
YOU IDIOT You try to destroy someone's life the feel miserable about it afterwards? STUPID JERK ! << ok XDD I'm mad. wahah XD
AND YOUR RYO YOU CLOSE MINDED SON OF A BITCH LISTEN TO YOUR GIRLFRIEND YOU IDIOT AND WHO ARE YOU CALLING A'GOOD'? Is she some kind of merchendise or something? Foo' :T

Ah~ The boxing gym~ The boxing gym relaxes me too~ And the instructors are just so kind they're like my uncles~~ ahah well in the boxing gym i go x]] but they closed down several months ago... :( I miss it.
fdklnvngf IM BABBLING AGAIN.

Anyway I can't wait for the next.
I hope this so-called 'family' isnt part of tegoshi's pot to destroy Ueda's life even more although it would be fun to see what an evil family would do XD
Loved it sweetheart !!
and good luck on monday ! ^^ <3 Chuu~

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ramadiii January 11 2010, 13:45:19 UTC
LOL!! I feel a little hatred towards one Akanishi Jin, am I right? xD
Don't go on hating them for too long darling, it's not healthy in the long run xD

I know what you mean, I only started boxing in gymclass but when speing comes I will start going to a real boxinggym ;) I'm looking forward to it :P

I'm thinking of making one of the many brothers mean but I don't know if he will have anything to do with Tegoshi or not yet, we'll just have to wait and see ;)
Thank you so much for liking it! And thank you for your support today, school went really well apart from my tailbone getting a little hurt in a fall during dramaclass but other than that it went without any problems ;)

Love you!!!

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ramadiii January 8 2010, 14:08:43 UTC
3:rd spot for Shuyen <3

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ramadiii January 8 2010, 14:09:13 UTC
4:th spot for Chanjuu <3

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chanjuu January 17 2010, 11:18:31 UTC
i cant believe u saved me spots =D ♥
as for the story, OMGOSH i was so not expecting Jin doing that but i kinda liked how he told the truth.. and ryo... god hes just being ryo, ugh. at least he should to ueda! but no..and what is jin doing! he needs to impress her!

and boxing scene totally reminded me of one pound gospel too XD
but im glad ueda joined it!

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ramadiii January 22 2010, 12:36:42 UTC
Of course I will save you spots! Your comments make me so happy, makes me feel like I've done a good job xD

The boys are kinda confused in this chapter, ne? Well, it will get better soon enough :P

It does, doesn't it? :P Don't know why since I only watched it once and it was a long time ago, but what heck :P *shrugs*

Thank you so much, again, for writing such nice things to me <3 Will meet you at the next chapter, ne? xD

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chanjuu January 22 2010, 18:50:26 UTC
Ahhhh, even if you dont save spots, i'll always comment on ur awesomeness =D
yes yes im reading the new one right noww =]

AWWW. Yes ofcourse *finishes new chapter*

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snow_meow January 8 2010, 16:14:45 UTC
I am glad that Ueda found some measure of happiness and something that she likes.

I hate Ryo for what he did. He really is so shallow.

As for Jin as much as I am upset with him, I bet he felt guilty for his actions. If not he wouldn't have gone to seek Ueda.

Right now, I rather Ueda pick up the pieces in her life and be happy.

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ramadiii January 11 2010, 13:55:08 UTC
Yes, the time for Tatsuya's own decisions and for her own life has finally begun, ne?

Guys are just creeps sometimes, ne? But I think we might come to like them in the end ;)

Thank you so much for liking, reading and commenting! Makes me so happy to hear from you <3

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