[Fanfic] The Shadow and the Knight

[ramadiii]

Title: The Shadow and the Knight
Fandom: Rookies
Pairing: Aniya Keiichi/Yagi Touko
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, drama
Length: 3214 words
Disclaimer: I love my characters but unless I can get one of them for Christmas this year, I don't own any of them.
Summary: ”You can't have a light without a dark to stick it in.” - Arlo Guthrie (1947- )
A/N: My first

Comments

[ramadiii]

WOW! That was fast!! xD I'm so glad you loved this, I've never written Rookies before so I could only hope that this turned out alright ;)
Looks like it did though xD

Thank you so much for reading and for liking it! Made my day <3

[idajj]

kyyyyaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
we soooo need more yagixaniya loving here in rookies fandom.
i sooo adore ittt! sweet sweet sweet!
planning to write anymoree? do share more pleasseee! :D

[ramadiii]

Yay! I got a 'kya'!
We do, right? Have hardly seen any in my search for Rookies-fics, too bad really because the series gave us so much to work with. I mean the relationship between the two is just amazing! Both seem to want it but neither of them dares to take the first step xD

Thank you so much for liking it! I planned to make this a multi-chapter first but it felt better as a one-shot. But to answer your question: I will never stop writing, as long as people read and like what I create ;)
I never wrote Rookies before but I have another one that's more like silly teasing from Aniya and blushing from Yagi, not too realistic that it but who knows... someone might like it apart from me ;)

I will try post the next one as soon as I can so stick around for it, okay? :3
Thanks again for reading, liking and dropping a comment! <3

[idajj]

too true! i was especially quite sad that the movies showed so little of aniyaxyagi story but i definitely love the brothers love in there. :)

i cannot but like it! it's wonderful! and i'm glad that you decided to continue to write more and more.
i shall follow and support you all the way!

gambatte yo!!!~~~
<3

[ramadiii]

Deshou?! I thought that at least the movie would have something between them but... no! That's why i decided to make my own version of "reality", like I always do when there's something I don't like ;)
Yay! I have a follower! (And I don't mean that in a creepy, cult-kinda way :P Be sure to stay on the lookout for the next fic from me, ne? The title for the next one is "The rules have changed"
What do you think? It will, hopefully, be kind of smutty in the end xD

[cwazy_weiven]

That was some really sweet Yagi/Aniya. Good job.

A few things though; Yagi actually calls Aniya Kei-chan, instead of his full first name. And an interesting thing to note that Aniya has never actually referred to Yagi by her name throughout the whole series. But seeing as they're childhood friends, I'd expect him to actually call her by her first name when they're alone together.

Good first story though. But now I have to go and stare at something blank for a while. White font on black background look really terrible on my screen @_@

[ramadiii]

Hihi! Thanks for thinking it's sweet <3
There is a meaning behind everything I write ;)
The reason why Yagi calls Aniya, Keiichi when she's mad is because she thinks it's ridiculous to call someone -chan when they argue, and besides, it make more of an impact, don't you think? I also noticed that he never calls her anything but even though he obviously has feelings for her he's too proud to let her in on it by calling her by her first-name.
Even, and especially, when they're alone together :P

Don't know how much sense that makes but that's what I think xD
Hihi, the white font might not be the best but you should have seen in the beginning when I used neon-green! *rolls around on the floor* it was straight out horrible to look at!

PS. I added you as a friend btw, I hope you don't mind ;)
Thanks for reading, means so much to me!

[cwazy_weiven]

That's even more point for you then. Nowadays people always tend to half ass their writing. They write for reviews but can't be bothered to do a decent job about it. But obviously this was well thought out and more power to your for it.

I actually understood exactly what you said :D And about the neon green...wow. You would have never gotten a review from me in that instance. I would have passed out half way while reading. Even now I had to copy everything into word to read it without getting a headache.

No problem. More friends with similar interests welcomed! I added you back bb.

[ramadiii]

Hehe, I just like to create little twists here and there but they can be kinda hard to get sometimes :P
Really? Is it that bad? Never really thought about it, I tend to get headaches if the font is black on white background, too bright for me. Guess it goes both ways, right?

Yay! I have a new friend <3 That means I'm not a stalker or a serial-killer, right? Sorry, just checked out your journal a little =3