Fanfiction: Chronicles of Narnia - London Sights [1/1]

[rambling_tales]

Title: London Sights
Fandom: The Chronicles of Narnia
Characters: Lucy, Peter
Word Count: 465
Prompt: AU100 #039 Sight
Rating: G
Summary: “I’m fine, Peter.” She smiles up at him after pulling away, still not quiet tall enough to meet him face-to-face, even with the help of the hospital building’s steps. “I just... I thought I saw someone I

Comments

[i_am_krazy]

Oh, wow.

No time for coherent comment (must leave for school now!)

Just wanted to say I am SO HAPPY. Also want to play in your world. Allowed?

Actual feedback sometime tonight.

[rambling_tales]

Hopefully it sounded okay. Originally, every paragraph was really a run-on sentence, and so I wasn't sure it flowed the way I wanted it to after I fixed that.

Glad you're happy. When you're happy, I'm happy. <3 Well considering this world was technically yours to begin with, you're welcome to play all you want.

(and also, just so you know, this will be cross-posted in le_kool because I wrote it for you and we need to revive it fast, as you've mentioned.)