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atomicbluekitty October 13 2008, 13:44:16 UTC
This is extremely depressing, but I like the glimmer of hope at the end. The poetry contrasts and compliments the story line. I like it.

Now, NEVER EVER WRITE A STORY WHERE KANJANI8 BREAKS UP! I HATE IT!!! But, it's still an interesting option to explore, and I do like how you wrote it.

Now, you saying that this is too emo/angsty, I like it. It works well with the story, and to get better at it, just keep writing.

So overall, give this 8/10!

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atomicbluekitty October 13 2008, 13:45:17 UTC
First WOOOOOOTTTTT!!!

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ramsy_kins October 13 2008, 13:50:20 UTC
I swear never to write another story where Kanjani8 breaks up.
I have a feeling if I post this elsewhere you won't be the only person saying that.
Thanks though!
Plus Kanjnai8 could never break up, after all I'm still in Osaka, I'd find them and smack them all even Hina :p

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atomicbluekitty October 13 2008, 13:53:25 UTC
Good! And keep doing it until they swear never to break up again, and if they even think of it, I will personally fly there, and well... they would not like what I would do! And then they would never break up!

I would be ten times worse with KAT-TUN! I actually read a story where that happened, and I was really close to killing the person who wrote it, but then KAT-TUN released a new song, so everything was great, and life was better again. ^_^

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setos_puppy October 13 2008, 20:21:42 UTC
............. *CRIES*

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ramsy_kins October 13 2008, 23:03:44 UTC
I KNOW!!!! I promise to wirte something fluffy soon.

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whited_79 October 14 2008, 06:19:47 UTC
*cries*

it would be great to post this at subassan_onegai as well :)

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ramsy_kins October 14 2008, 06:22:04 UTC
I think I may since it's gotten a good response despite the fact that it keeps making people cry.

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