FIC: We Really Shouldn't Be Doing This (6/?) - (Brittany/Santana)

[random_flores]

Title: We Really Should't Be Doing This (5/?)
Author: Misty Flores

Teaser: It’s not just a pair of glasses that keeps Brittany S. Pierce from noticing that her hapless best friend and colleague is actually the superhero of her dreams.
Genre: Glee, Brittany/Santana
AU: Superwoman
Prompt: Brittany keeps falling off buildings.
Rating: T for now, M

Comments

[rigelinorion]

Too short! My only gripe. I love how all the action here happens in one long long moment and we get to see all the thoughts and confusion in Brittany's head. And all the subtleties of Superwoman..Santana, still holding on to her secret but seemingly barely.

[random_flores]

I know! I really want to focus on making the chapters longer, but unfortunately nowadays I steal what little time I have and then I don't get a chance to write again for another few days, so I figured better to post what I have now than to wait another week. :) ANd yes, Brittany's a super-genius, so I have a feeling it won't take too long for her to figure this out, especially the more time she spends with Superwoman. ;)

[rigelinorion]

It's great having updates, no worries!

[turtlevenom7]

This update was great. I loved the run of emotions/thoughts going through Brittany's head.

My favorite part though was exactly how unhelpful Quinn was the entire time. I could picture the look on Brittany's face and Santana's increasing frustration/worry. Not sure if appropriate but I laughed very much out loud.

Earnestly waiting for the next installment. :)

[random_flores]

Yes, poor Quinn. She's trying to help, really! But she's still... Quinn. To even think what was going through Santana's head during all of that is amusing!

[anonymous]

I was waiting for an update from this fic, it's great!
It's so sad that Britt's heart is being broken by the person right in front of her :(
I cant wait to see what you do next!

[random_flores]

Thank you! And yes, for sure. What's worse, I think, is that Santana can't do a thing about it!

[wedowhat]

Oh Quinn, trying so hard to be helpful...

Great chapter, but poor Santana, I'll love to see how she's going to get out of this one. Thanks for writing and very much looking forward to the next installment.

[random_flores]

thanks so much! And yes, Santana does have her hands full, doesn't she? Being a superhero does wreak havoc on her love life. ;)

[capnfantastico]

quinn's initial level of frustration when santana being kidnapped is first mentioned is perfect. i really did laugh out loud, at work, reading that.