Comments | random_nic: Fic: The Other Side of Us, Part 9

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Fic: The Other Side of Us, Part 9

Oct 11, 2013 19:21

Title: The Other Side of Us
Author: random_nic
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are the property of Telenext and CBS.
Word Count: 1675
Summary: Lives are changed in the wake of a traumatic event.

( Chris had suspected as much. )

fanfic, noah, atwt, neid, luke, reid

Comments 16

123cariad October 12 2013, 10:11:30 UTC

Awe our poor Boy thinks that Luke did not love him at the end .. You will get him to see how wrong he is >> YES LOL

Go Reid .. Dr O doesn't have to explain his action to anyone lol

Hope you realize Nic you going down for mass murder lol you killing us all here lol

See and giving the heart to a Demnetor is sounding better by the minute lol

More please... I know I am greedy sue me lol ;)

random_nic October 13 2013, 08:36:20 UTC

My mind's scrambling to work a dementor into this somehow...

wheelie47 October 12 2013, 11:17:25 UTC

I'm impressed and in awe with how you're keeping up this pace without losing any of the excellence! I think I might hate you a little! Lol!

But seriously what an update, Nic! Chris has planted a seed in Noah's mind that's got him thinking. And now I can't decide if that's where you're heading or you're teasing us!

You captured Reid's snark there perfectly but you've got me wondering what's happened between them in the past.

It's heartbreaking Luke died with Noah thinking he didn't love him and they were never right for each other. Sigh!

Bring on the next chapter!

random_nic October 13 2013, 08:39:08 UTC

My pace fell off with the next one, but it's up now lol. I got weirdly stuck not on the writing of the chapter, but on deciding which scene should come next. I should've just written a few different ones, then picked lol.

seajellybaby October 13 2013, 10:15:36 UTC

Geez! Can't the poor guy ever catch a break? Sucks! What's worse is that there are plenty of people who love him enough to bail him out - But our Noah is way too proud!

Even though Chris is poisoning Reid's "good" (lol) name to Noah, you get the feeling Noah had started to see glimpses of that other side of Reid that Luke did... And so Noah's not entirely sure which POV to take at face value...

random_nic October 13 2013, 13:11:09 UTC

Geez! Can't the poor guy ever catch a break?

The author of the L.A. Series says this to me? Really, Gillian? ;)

But you're right. Asking for help isn't one of Noah's strong points!