Comments | random_nic: Fic: The Other Side of Us, Part 13

random_nic

Fic: The Other Side of Us, Part 13

Oct 15, 2013 23:58

Title: The Other Side of Us
Author: random_nic
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are the property of Telenext and CBS.
Word Count: 1400
Summary: Lives are changed in the wake of a traumatic event.

( What are you doing here? )

fanfic, noah, atwt, neid, luke, reid

Comments 17

valenti1965 October 19 2013, 21:24:55 UTC

Very moving chapter NIc. Ethan...omg that poor boy! Heart breaks for him.

Take better care of Luke's heart second time around - kill me dead why don't you?!?

Totally love the snarkiness between Reid and Noah.

Don't know where it's heading.....but can't wait for more.

random_nic October 19 2013, 22:51:16 UTC

You and Stella said the same thing. Are the italics not enough to indicate a dream? I don't know how else to do dreams, except say "and then he woke up" LOL.

And I know where you *want* that snarkiness to head...

123cariad October 19 2013, 23:27:12 UTC

What can I say great minds and all that ha ha Drams can still kill ya lol

123cariad October 19 2013, 21:48:38 UTC

You keeping us on our toes lol and guessing where this is heading lol

Awe my heart breaks for Ethan ..

I just love the interaction between our men xx

random_nic October 19 2013, 22:52:13 UTC

Ethan's young, he'll bounce back. ;) Seriously, thanks for all of your support with this story, Stella.

sarahsezlove October 20 2013, 09:19:16 UTC

Every chapter...you just make me love Reid more.

It's a gift :)

random_nic October 20 2013, 11:06:38 UTC

Ha, thanks! Though I find loving Reid more daily is pretty much a given. ;) Thank you for continuing to read, Sarah!

wheelie47 October 20 2013, 18:06:48 UTC

Ah Nic! You certainly know how to pull on those heartstrings! Dream or no - poor Ethan. I like how it's still not completely clear whose dream it is, too.

And it seems Reid has his uses where the loving but over-whelming Snyders are concerned!

Great chapter!

random_nic October 21 2013, 14:45:38 UTC

I can think of plenty of uses for Reid...

Er, um, what were you saying?

wheelie47 October 21 2013, 15:10:23 UTC

Put. Him. Down! You need him to finish the story!

random_nic October 23 2013, 16:50:33 UTC

Dammit!

jb1183 October 21 2013, 05:07:52 UTC

Noah's pain continues to break my heart. It's not even agonizing grief anymore, it's just a general depressive sense of life holding no excitement or promise whatsoever. But you've offered some early glimmers of light for him with Reid bringing (forcing) him to visit the family. It's an act of true friendship, though neither of them are explicitly using that language to describe their association yet ( ... )

random_nic October 21 2013, 14:58:05 UTC

You win for quality output, Jim ( ... )