The Worst Type Of Lying

Oct 30, 2010 11:19


Title: The Worst Type Of Lying
Pairing: Elijah/Orlando
Rating: PG15
Disclaimer: No I don’t own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any is appreciated.
Notes: For thefrenchgirl2 and lisabellex , who both requested ‘Truth or Dare’ fics. Maybe not quite what you asked for - it’s angstier than I would like - but I hope it’s enjoyable all the same.

The Worst Type Of Lying )

elijah/orlando

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moit October 30 2010, 13:05:55 UTC

Ohhh that was sad! Soso sad!!! Damn Orli getting married!

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randomdarling October 30 2010, 17:11:52 UTC
I don't normally write angst, and honestly it's not my favourite thing to read either, but I'm glad you liked this. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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thefrenchgirl2 October 30 2010, 13:18:23 UTC
Oh... This is sooo... *wipes tears*

Elijah looked away, and it was that moment, the turning of his head away from Orlando, that hit Orlando the hardest. It still hits him the hardest - that exact angle of Elijah’s jaw, the sudden tightening of his lips that only Orlando would ever notice or know what it meant, the drop of eyelashes against cheekbones.

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“Hey,” Elijah says. “I guess my congratulations are in order.” He smiles at the ring on Orlando’s finger.

Hurts. Really hurts. Ouch. :(

(In my own world, Orlando eventually says 'fuck marriage' and kisses Elijah deeply.)

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randomdarling October 30 2010, 17:12:56 UTC
I'm so pleased you liked this! Yeah, it turned out a lot angstier than I meant it to. :P Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

(I also like your ending quite a lot! :D )

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itstonedme October 31 2010, 17:09:20 UTC
I very much enjoyed this, bringing the real into the slash. All the might-have-beens and never-will-bes. Very well done.

(I am SO happy to see you writing again!)

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randomdarling November 3 2010, 09:47:40 UTC
bringing the real into the slash It's something I hardly ever do - I'd rather write a wild AU any day. :P I'm so glad you liked this though, and thank you for commenting. :) x

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lisabellex November 5 2010, 22:23:38 UTC
Oh, this is so poignant. There's so much unrealised potential between these two - it saddens me to think of all the tender moments and soul-tingling sex they've missed by keeping their true feelings locked away and living with compromise.

Thank you so much for writing this. I'm very happy to see you writing again!

:D

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randomdarling November 6 2010, 12:54:40 UTC
Thank you for reading and for your encouraging words. I'm glad the poignancy came across. *hugs*

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malefantasy November 6 2010, 22:16:43 UTC
meep! that was the first orlijah anything i've read in awhile and i just want to make it better! it was quite good though :)

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randomdarling November 7 2010, 11:34:54 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! It's nice to see you around. :)

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malefantasy November 7 2010, 15:13:26 UTC
you're welcome, dear :) it's good to be back around. :)

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