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randomdarling

Playing Cat and Mouse

May 27, 2011 17:16

Title: Playing Cat and Mouse
Pairing: Sean/Elijah
Rating: R
Disclaimer: No I don’t own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any is much appreciated.
Notes: for telstar109 , with the prompt: "mouse". From this AU.

( Playing Cat and Mouse )

au, elijah/sean

Comments 19

moit May 27 2011, 18:37:14 UTC

Awe the mouse in the end! ;) That was cute and hot.

randomdarling May 28 2011, 10:06:27 UTC

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, I'm glad you liked it. :)

belleferret May 27 2011, 19:06:03 UTC

Eeee, what fun to come back to this universe. I'm surprised that nothing happened after the first party, but I think the small brown mouse succeeded in being a good matchmaker!

Lucky little critter was probably watching from under one of the cabinets!

randomdarling May 28 2011, 10:07:14 UTC

I wish I was that mouse, I bet he had a good view. :P ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting, it's much appreciated. :)

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randomdarling May 28 2011, 10:07:44 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked this. :)

telstar_gold May 27 2011, 19:40:38 UTC

Oh, I love this! I'm so glad you used the prompt to write some more in this universe. I love the awkwardness, the uncertainty between them, and the total lack of sentimentality. I just know they're right on the brink of falling for each other big time! :)))) For a while, I thought the mouse was just a ruse on Elijah's part to get himself inside Sean's pants apartment. But I'm glad to see it made an appearance in the end! I do hope this won't be the last we see of it and them! :)))

randomdarling May 28 2011, 10:08:37 UTC

I'm glad you didn't mind a fic from this universe, and that you liked the end result. Your prompt was a lot of fun, so thank you! :D

lisabellex May 27 2011, 19:48:59 UTC

The mouse just missed the action!

Awww, that was lovely. I loved all the little touches, like Elijah's shyness, him pushing his glasses up his nose, and his bony knees, and the way these two came together again in all their awkward glory a year after their first amorous encounter. May this be the second such encounter of many.

Really lovely.

:D

randomdarling May 28 2011, 10:09:09 UTC

Poor mouse. :P

I'm glad you liked this - thanks for reading, and for your lovely feedback. :)