Fiction: Fate

[randomgirl666]

Trigger warning: rape

Comments

[loolaa]

I like the dialogue in this one... but I didn't quite get it.
Maybe it's too subtle for me?

[randomgirl666]

"Get it" as in "understanding the plot" or "get it" as in "it didn't work as a whole overall?"

[loolaa]

It worked, I think. I just didn't understand why she was gonna do him in too unless it was a case of 'well why not?'
I guess it was the plot I didn't understand?

[randomgirl666]

He was a loose end. And it wasn't so much a case of necessarily killing him, as just making sure he wasn't going to say anything. It's a signal to the reader that there is still some feeling between the two of them, it's just beyond hope.