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Nov 05, 2005 11:49

This is my first ever attempt at fan fiction. I just really wanted more about ( Read more... )

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faith_less_one November 7 2005, 07:45:37 UTC

Perfect idea. I was a little worried about how you were going to get out of that - but it was brilliant!!! Loved Mal and Simon particularly.

randomsignal November 8 2005, 07:02:01 UTC

Thank you!
I'm really glad you liked it.

jaegamer November 7 2005, 14:39:25 UTC

Shiny! Nice little vignette and a clever solution to the problem.

randomsignal November 8 2005, 07:02:43 UTC

Ooh "clever" I like that.
Thanks

mishbloom November 7 2005, 17:56:00 UTC

---"Made a sound." She said as she stepped through the hatch. "No creeping."---

AWWWW! 'Cause creeping just makes Mal testy! LOL

I loved it! All of it! After all wasn't it just perfectly obvious that River could fix it? Sheesh! Some faith that brother of hers has in his little sister's abilities.

*begs for more*

randomsignal November 8 2005, 07:07:01 UTC

Aww, you made me blush.
I agree, it should have been perfectly obvious, and Simon is thick as a brick--but I've heard that over-protective big brothers can be like that.
Thanks for the encouragement.
I'm working on a couple of ideas for other Firefly stories now. If they work out, I'll post them too.