Comments | randysgirl_645: Connected

randysgirl_645

Connected

Jul 27, 2009 18:22

Title: Connected, Part 1/?

Author:
( Read more... )

Comments 14

shinoakkitenshi July 28 2009, 03:15:15 UTC

I definitely get a feel of who Brian is. He seems to be extremely blunt and to the point, no beating around the bush ( ... )

randysgirl_645 July 28 2009, 20:59:08 UTC

thank you for the constructive criticism I'll take it into account for the next chapter :) I'm glad you liked it :)

spike7451 July 28 2009, 13:31:06 UTC

Wonderful start, I do love a Vampire fic. :) Looking forward to more.

randysgirl_645 July 28 2009, 20:59:48 UTC

Thank you :D more will be up soon I'm gonna start writing the second chapter today :)

anno53 July 28 2009, 13:45:51 UTC

You've got me hooked! Me needs more!

randysgirl_645 July 28 2009, 21:00:12 UTC

Thank you :D more soon :)

meri2ant July 28 2009, 18:07:35 UTC

Great start!! Love well written vampire!fics. Can't wait for more!

randysgirl_645 July 28 2009, 21:00:51 UTC

I'm glad you liked it and think it's well written :)

shenova July 28 2009, 19:18:43 UTC

Vampire fic for a change why not I will have a look. I like it so far and I am interested to see what happens in the morning. Will he feed on Justin like he did the others I wonder???

randysgirl_645 July 28 2009, 21:01:59 UTC

thank you :D

Will he feed on Justin like he did the others I wonder???

you'll have to wait and read *evil laugh*