War of the Burning Sky novel serialization

[rangerwickett]

EN World, a large gaming website, is publishing a novel I have written, serialized with a few chapters each month. The first part is available to read now: http://www.enworld.org/forum/blogs/rangerwickett/Read more... )

Comments

Congrats

[arrovian]

Great job Ryan. Did you make any changes in this compared to the original draft you sent out? I read the new one and didn't spot any major changes. I hope it gets a great reception, and that you eventually get out a bound version for $$$.

[rangerwickett]

No significant changes. But I did go through and do my creative writing professors proud by cutting out passive voice like it was kudzu. I'll have to pay more attention to avoiding it in the future.

Only 2 months 'til Shalosha shows up, and then only . . . a year and a half 'til the 'first date.'

[arrovian]

Such a tease.

[orryn_emrys]

Very nice... lookin' forward to reading the rest. It's nice to see a little more exposition on NPCs that are still active in my current campaign... gives me ideas to help fill them out. Of course, I'll have to monitor the material for spoilers before I turn any of my players on to it....

[arrovian]

Where's the next installment Nock? Your writing has really picked up in quality. Wish you were getting a better response on the site.