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Mar 23, 2008 00:20

Time weaves and flows
As the fires drive below,
to the tepest's blows.
New folds to old.

The waves trickle out,
Magents pulsing cloth,
Tempist inverting about,
Old folds to new.

Calm floating upon the sunless seas.

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ranthog March 25 2008, 03:42:03 UTC
Bonus points if you understand the imagery of stanza 2.

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ranthog March 26 2008, 00:46:48 UTC
Actually the half serious answer is interesting. Actually more interesting than the actual thing I was thinking about. :-)

What it really was describing was are speakers, which are of course just cloth vibrated by magnets. Or more specifically music.

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mishib March 24 2008, 03:35:15 UTC
Love it. You should do more of the poetry.

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