Comments | raotzu: There's no sex in your violence

raotzu

There's no sex in your violence

Dec 03, 2004 09:58

A Scapegoat Called Music ( Read more... )

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Brother o' mine, tell me where have you been... abri_kadabri December 6 2004, 06:37:48 UTC

That's a great paper Ike, I appreciate it a lot.

rather be forgotten than remembered for giving in... simplypekyulear December 7 2004, 11:20:06 UTC

I agree with everyone's post so far, for the most part. It's well stated, well cited and well structured. As with each of your other works, the only criticisms I have is that in one or two spots there needs to be a transition sentence added, just for flow's sake, that and i just wish you wrote more. Your message is right on and well argued, I just plain wish you extended it. other than that, fucker's perfect!

BTW simplypekyulear December 7 2004, 11:21:54 UTC

Nice lyric subject. Bush references are always bonus points.