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[raotzu]

My eyes fixated on the pink flower

Comments

Too hard on yourself

[anonymous]

Why in the world do you think you can't write poetry? That was amazing! It set a scene, evoked senses, created a character, and I don't know what all else, but I could see it all very clearly. To me, that's good writing. And, no, I'm not just saying this because I am your mom!

[simplypekyulear]

I really like it. Eight readings in, it's way deep, dude. I wanna see more! I'm foaming at the mouth, here! And tell me what's up. I've missed you lately when you've been around.

[raotzu]

Thanks bud, i will post another. I have missed you as well...hopefully we see each other soon

[abri_kadabri]

I couldn't agree more.