Alpha and Omega part 96 - "Mistress Starbuck"

Oct 31, 2011 15:17

Woo! Its the first fan request. geekbynight gave me the Writer's Choice word "Pegging". After she explained what that was, I realized I was on the hook for porn. Let me be honest, this likely isn't good porn but what the hell. Many thanks to beta jarodrussell, blaaksable and blue_crow for good betaing and for assisting with technical questions.

Mistress Starbuck )

a&o, tablefic, porn!

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daybreak777 October 31 2011, 22:30:10 UTC
I liked this, Rappy! There is something very sweet and gentle about the way you write them, at least to me. I feel they are in a trusting and loving relationship so they can have whatever fun they want. And they had fun. :-)

I'm going to miss this story. :-)

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rapfic October 31 2011, 22:36:36 UTC
Wait... Kara is tying up and spanking Felix and giving him an ass ramming to remember.... and you find this all very sweet and gentle?

This explains so much >:)

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blaaksable October 31 2011, 22:52:59 UTC
Hahaha, I agree that there's something sweet about it. Just the idea of Starbuck going out of her way to do something just for Felix, and him trustingly allowing the local crazy pilot lady to blindfold him and tie him up...

And the ass ramming was cute because it shows she caaares! I liked the banter. How Gaeta is clearly playing, but just into it enough.

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rapfic October 31 2011, 23:00:50 UTC
I'm glad you convinced me to cut the "And then he splooged the bed" part :D

And Felix is so coy, isn't he? All dainty and playing along until suddenly he's having an awesome time and its all about him! :)

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blaaksable October 31 2011, 23:57:44 UTC
he erupted with the evidence of his pleasure! SPLOOGE EVERYWHERE

And yes, I love the balance you create with them.

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rapfic October 31 2011, 23:20:33 UTC
I am no expert in s&m but I believe the reason its considered pleasurable is because o the trust factor.

I rather think this is geniunely not something that would appeal to Kara in a steady dose... she seems much more spontanous, but as "something fun for Felix" complete with a creepy laminated schedule, I think she'd have fun with it.

Glad you like!

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lorrainemarker November 1 2011, 01:42:00 UTC
Okay, I've been way too busy writing if I missed this! Rap Porn. I agree with the other comments that there is something very sweet about this part. Kara is so clearly doing something for Felix and they are both playing, but also into it. Kara wouldn't do this for just anyone. Also, I adore and love that everyone in the pilot rec room knows that Kara's going to peg Felix and was hunting for the right equipment. As a matter of fact, I think I know what your treat will be. If I have permission to play in your sandbox?

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rap541 November 1 2011, 01:47:32 UTC
Sure! :D Glad you like!

Just remember that Racetrack's mom was a soliciater in this 'verse

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trovia November 3 2011, 21:31:37 UTC
An explosion of pleasure! Aw, Rap. You have this slightly removed way of writing the sex that is partly amusing, and partly making it feel real in an unexpected way.

Also, as somebody who has done all the kinky things of the fic for real, I appreciated the humor. Let's face it, there's no way one could ever have sex like that without cracking up about a dozen different things, none the least the ridiculous dirty talk. ;)

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rap541 November 5 2011, 00:44:25 UTC
Well, as an asexual, I am basically a car mechanic who has never driven a car here... :)

Honestly, this was in part an homage to my boyfriend and I and our abortive experiement where I tied him up and then laughed at how stupid the whole thing seemed.

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trovia November 5 2011, 00:49:18 UTC
Heh... the straight sex was always like that for me, too. With the lesbian sex, the difference is that I don't care - I still find myself horny. ;)

You haven't written a lot recently! How come? I would enjoy reading another of your crossovers.

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rap541 November 5 2011, 00:53:49 UTC
Out of sorts mostly... have had ideas that are cool but need more info to make work. Not sure if you get Terra Nova in EuroDisney but it could cross nicely with bsg.... but I need more episodes to commit.

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