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i_want_2 August 27 2014, 16:48:36 UTC
So very soft. A well written end to your excellent fic.

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rap541 September 17 2014, 03:37:21 UTC
Aw, I feel bad I ignored this.

And you're a good sport, this is such a soppy fic for me....

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jarodrussell November 5 2014, 08:37:08 UTC
It felt odd at first not having the doctor in the last scene but it would not have worked as well with him. Nicely done.

"In the back, behind the popcorn machine."

How did you deliver a perfect Twelve line before he debuted?

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rap541 November 6 2014, 00:39:39 UTC
I genuinely considered the "oh hey we were just coming in from our church looking at trips and look what we found" concept to get Donna and Ten back in, but it just didn't work. Too many odd questions would come up, the idea was that the family for the most part is not to know that this wasn't a kidnapping gone terribly wrong so if Ten arrived back with Matthew... it would get too awkward ( ... )

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