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Nov 26, 2010 01:14

and just like that
the chance is gone
I held my breath
a second too long.

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sarcasticwriter November 26 2010, 07:56:37 UTC
Um...are you okay? This post is rather alarming!

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raphaela November 26 2010, 17:23:23 UTC
I was going to buy something online, but they ran out before I could decide. ;)

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sarcasticwriter November 26 2010, 17:42:03 UTC
Oh! LOL! I read it as absolutely deadly serious. As in, a tragic, life-altering event had just occurred as a result of a critical decision you hadn't made.

I don't know why I thought that. I think your capitalization and punctuation subconsciously made me read your little ditty as if it were an ee cummings poem, laden with depth of meaning not necessarily indicated by the content.

I'm very silly, though.

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raphaela November 26 2010, 18:35:06 UTC
No worries. My 12th grade English teacher sent me to the school counselor over a poem she thought was my suicide note. It wasn't. It was about being a fangirl.

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