My Hisashi Drawing: Manga Style

[raphaelia]

Heex. Here's something very humble.. My 1st Hisashi fanart. It's the second picture I've ever drawn of a real person. Well, my first was Yoshiki ^^

Comments are greatly welcome and appreciated. Do say whatever you think, be it good or bad. Your comments can help me improve. THANKS!!!!

Comments

[h1545h1]

I like them both alot. The second seems to have more of a sense of "Hisashi"-ness about it. I think its the smaller pupils. (Both sets of eyes are lovely though!) Your lines are very expressive and and you have a pretty good balance of light and dark. Maybe increase the contrast in his hair just a little? And I love the little sprig of hair sticking up on his head. *^.^* Too cute!

[raphaelia]

Hmmm. Just like his blonde+black hair? THANKS!!

[wayama_hisashi]

Mmmm...i like it!!
It's something in his eyes....

[tonnomura]

those are so cute!!!!!! nice!!!!

[mika_ubi]

Whoa~ Nice drawing ne~ You're really talented! But I think I like the 2nd drawing more hehe.

[raphaelia]

Hello *waves*

Thanks for your compliments. Yeah.. The 1st one didn't turn up well.

[alagthondiel]

i like the second attempt better, but that may be because he reminds me of dark from sugisaki's d.n. angel manga. |D both are very pretty tho~
have to say i love your style and the shading, very dynamic!

looking forward to more art!

[raphaelia]

d.n.angel.. Haha... :D Maybe it's because of the hair ^^

Sankyu!