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happyberrypink March 29 2011, 12:19:40 UTC
Yay~ Another wonderful chapter. :)

I love the cover...you always take such interesting shots and in this case it reflects the relationship dynamics of the story really well. Is it wrong of me to think Nick is hot as a cave man? *laughs*

Erica...makes me uncomfortable. Can't quite put my finger on why though her move to go into politics could do it.

And Kendra is hilarious. That scene with Ed made me giggle out loud.

Thank you~!

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raquelaroden March 29 2011, 22:08:18 UTC
Thank you so much! I don't think it is wrong at all to think that Nick is hot as a cave man--I was nice and gave him the hair that doesn't look like it was caught in a mixer, LOL.

I think it would be hard to be around Erica, especially if you didn't know her that well--she'd have to come across as some sort of strategist, and every move she made would make you wonder how she'd decided to use you. It's probably difficult for people to regard her as genuine.

I'm glad you liked the scene with Kendra and Ed--they have such a different approach to relationships that it is fun to see how they play off each other. :)

Again, thank you very much for your kind comments and for reading my story!

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