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[rarelyhonest]

my poetry prof thinks im amazing. :D he said "What I hoped would happen with this assignment is that everyone would be forced to write concisely and rely on images to convey meaning. You’ve done that very well. Now I’d like to see what happens if you approach the poem without the restrictions." (our restrictions were to make a list of 20 words and

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[dropgod26]

this is awesome! it definately speaks clearer than the first version. and the transitions between stanzas is very nice. i love the feeling the poem gives, it's like...chill then it gets all discombobulated and has a distraught feeling to it, then it chills out again. definately a feeling i deal with in my everyday life, hah, i always gotta bring myself back down or up to ground level and just go with the flow.

hah, you have given me a lot to say. i would love to show you some of my poetry, actually, some of the lyrics for my new solo album i'm working on, see what you think...because you definately know how to write well ;)

talk to ya later kiddo

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