Our old lady time she's still a-flying; Onew/Taemin

[debriefings]

Title: our old lady time she's still a-flying
Pairing: Onew/Taemin
Rating: R
Word count: 2,393 words
Summary: Jinki moves to a lake side home and meets a neighbour who can manipulate time.

Prompt #8: Onew/Taemin; "When he told the truth it never sounded like the truth but it felt like the truth."

Comments

[rebreak]

okay, first off, you worked wonders with the prompt. like, this is more amazing than i thought it would be. ♥ (": i was thoroughly excited to read this, and it's so wonderful; i'll probably demand you post this in your journal so i can flail there a bit more.

If he were in Seoul, they'd be at noraebang or an ice-cream parlour, still in their uniforms, shirt tails not tucked into their pants in rebellion. Kibum would join them and say something horrible about Jinki's face or accuse him of profound mental retardation. And Jonghyun would defend him, like 'this guy is second in our class you asshole,' and swat Kibum's head with a dessert spoon.i loved that part because the relationship you've described here is totally precious ;; like, key accusing onew of being retarded and jonghyun hitting key with the dessert spoon. the mental image is amazing

[milktour]

the opening and the ending especially were so totally charming ;____; ♥