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For Alesserrain: Empires at War

Jan 27, 2015 20:30

For: Alesserrain
Author: kojafras
Title: Empires at War
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Xiumin/Suho
Word count: 2018
Summary: The heirs of the Kim companies despise each other. Everyone knows that.

( The entire venue is lit up; decorations bordering on gaudy but still managing to seem tasteful. )

pairing: suho/xiumin, !r2014, rating: pg-13

Comments 5

alesserrain January 28 2015, 05:37:37 UTC

Oh my god. You chose the rival chaebol heirs prompt. I'll come back when I'm more coherent

alesserrain January 28 2015, 10:11:29 UTC

Not sure if I'm more calm now but I'm taking a stab at it:

First, I really like the outsider point of view in the beginning? Of course, of course Tao would make the grave error of inviting two guests that would probably kill each other on the spot (although not really but I digress). Tao is cute and the reaction of his guests are cute.

Then Joonmyun and the moment of truth when he faces off Minseok... is gold, absolute gold, I was snickering at Minseok's "whoops". I enjoyed asshole!Minseok a little too much. And those scenes in the restroom (!!), the bit of aggression between Joonmyun and Minseok (!!), the glimpse that they've been doing this for sometime, sneaking behind people's backs to make-out (!!), I liked them a lot too.

Thank you very much for choosing to write this prompt, you made me incredibly happy.

canadaphile January 28 2015, 16:43:45 UTC

If Sehun took care of everything else, why did he not check the invitations? ;;w;; Could've saved some embarrassment and anxiety, but then the Kims wouldn't have had the excuse to rendezvous. uwu

=^..^=~

kimmingyu February 2 2015, 05:17:38 UTC

this was so good *u* i wish this was longer tbh ;3;

thank you for writing this! c:

mydeerest_luhan February 2 2015, 06:49:56 UTC

I love this! I really wish this was longer :)