For Bluedreaming: The World Through Your Eyes

Jan 17, 2015 22:34

For: bluedreaming
Author: eoryndal
Title: The World Through Your Eyes
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Baekhyun/Tao
Word count: 10k
Summary: Baekhyun is a travelling photographer who loses his heart along the way but gains a travel companion, as a one-night-stand turns into a year and counting.
A/N: There is lots of smut in this. But also lots of plot! I loved the prompt, had ( Read more... )

!r2014, rating: nc-17, pairing: baekhyun/tao

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bluedreaming January 17 2015, 22:56:22 UTC
Okay I FINALLY managed to read this and !(◎_◎;) ♡ ♡ it's so perfect, so BAEKTAO and of COURSE they would finally properly introduce themselves during actual sex and Baek is so clingy without realizing it because he holds himself back and Tao just has a heart of gold. And the smut was so good!!! This was the perfect travelling photography story, so many places, hotel rooms, hot springs!!! And yes tao is like the ocean...and I still can't get over the Little Elephant - so magic. I love it. I'll remember it forever. Panda and elephant. Wow. I can't thank you enough for this gorgeous wonderful beautiful story and I really can't wait to know who you are!

Edit: also I forgot to mention I love the seasons!!! And I still have little elephant stuck in my head, I actually went and made this little_elephant I blame you for everything. (In the best way.) And curse the person who already had that name and deleted and purged and made me spend money on it lol

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eoryndal February 4 2015, 19:34:06 UTC
I'm so glad you like this ;A; <3 (I'm glad you liked the smut, too haha /blushes shyly)

BaekTao is one of my favourite pairings but this was actually the first time I wrote them and I was really nervous if I could make them work. Their relationship is so interesting, it has so many layers! Their characters are so different but they understand each other almost effortlessly, they squabble and banter and have little playfights but under all of that, you can feel how much they care for each other, and they have these gentle moments, too, and they can both be kinda bold and loud but they also have sides that they don't let everyone see, like irl when Baekhyun went through a slup in his singing career, and Tao who can be so vulnerabe underneath all his self-confidence. I loved the chance to explore them as characters in this fic ^^

I can't believe you even spent money to make a comm inspired by the little elephant theme!!! ;o; <3 Can I join it or are you planning to use it for a private purpose?

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bluedreaming February 4 2015, 23:48:42 UTC
It was fabulous! I loved it to pieces ♡ It was your first time writing them? I reall couldn't tell at all ^^ their dynamic was awesome and it's so much fun to read them because they have a strange kind of push and pull balance that still works so well I think. I'm glad you had fun!

You can join it if you like lol - actually after thinking about it for a while I decided to maybe do a little baektao project in the fall/winter (since right now I'm busy with the_exordium and ateliers ) - ask a few people to write baektao and have a small collection of baektao stories to post over the span of a week; I don't know if that's something you'd be interested in? But anyway you're more than welcome to join!

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eoryndal February 10 2015, 18:04:23 UTC
Individually, in other pairings, I've written them before. But it was the first time writing them as a ship ^^ I've always wanted to and have a few fic ideas but nothing I managed to finish yet, so when your prompts gave me the opportunity, I jumped on it :D (Though tbh it was mostly the "travelling photographer" that made me want to write it because it sounded soooo nice *___* This is me chanelling my own yearning to go on a trip.)

I love their interactions in real life, too ^^ So playful but also supportve in a way that doesn't require many words.

I'd love to contribute to the BaekTao project! <3 Fall/winter sounds perfect because I'm also thinking about taking up some other fic exchanges over the course of the spring and summer. Which ones, I haven't decided 100% yet because there are so many! @.@ Haha, I think Exo ficdom holds the record of the most fic exchanges!
Anyway, I hope yours are going well~

And I'll send you a follow request on twitter right now, so you'll know it's me ^^

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canadaphile January 18 2015, 02:07:14 UTC
♥♥♥ _: (´□`」 ∠):_ ♥♥♥
This was so perfect. Goodness. Lots of smut, yes, but it was progressive, with all of Baekhyun's babbling.

Of all animals, though ... an elephant. Comparing him to an elephant. Totally the hottest choice.

I loved the dialogue, the build, and that bit of emotional conflict that ended up being pretty easy to overcome. Long distance be damned; they make it work.

And our other two models. Our babies. From university. Only come in for photoshoots. I squealed. Their model babies.

=^..^=~

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eoryndal February 4 2015, 19:42:33 UTC
Hi~ Me again :D

I'm honoured that you who wrote three!! amazing stories for me like what I wrote, too!

Lol~ It's not supposed to be sexy, at first Tao said it to make fun of Baekhyun because his moans weren't sexy but reminded him of a tiny trumpeting elephant xD But then it turned into a term of endearment (sort of like the sogogi thing they have irl ^^ )

Their model babies are Sehun and Kai, of course~

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canadaphile February 4 2015, 19:59:41 UTC
Quality over quantity, friend. uwu

But still. Of all the animals in the animal kingdom. An elephant. They don't mate for live, fun fact, and they have kind of untimed courtships, but they are very very emotional, social animals, so it's actually a rather sweet animal, if you think about it too much like I do.

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eoryndal February 4 2015, 20:22:58 UTC
Speaking of friends, can I add you? <3

Hehe, they are often seen as clumsy because they look plump and slow, and yet they care for their fellow elephants to a sometimes heartbreaking extent, they're so loyal and caring. And they have such an astonishing memory, almost like a photographic memory which ties in with Baekhyun's photography~ (Plus, baby elephants are just super cute!)

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kimiko1387 January 24 2015, 10:24:34 UTC
*___* of course Baekhyun is a chatty sex partner. I loved that! This was so fluffy and barely had any pain, plus tons of sex! And they say the beef brothers can't get a long! Thanks for writing. I really enjoyed!

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eoryndal February 4 2015, 19:45:13 UTC
He would be, wouldn't he? ^.~

Who says beef brothers can't get along? D: Lies and slander!

Thank you for reading and commenting <3

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sorakim_90 January 25 2015, 10:06:55 UTC
Can I kiss you authornim?? Because, seriously, Baektao fic is so rare and you even make this story at the top of the list of my favorite fic of the entire pairing. Why are they so cute, I love their dynamic and they really complete each other that I felt like crying and cooing. And Tao calling Baek "little elephant" gosh!! I can't stop smilling while reading this. They really like a married couple, alays understand each other *sobs* Thank you so much authornim. I feel like I can read it over and over again

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eoryndal February 4 2015, 19:51:31 UTC
(*^3(*^o^*) /kiss accepted with delight~

I've shipped BaekTao since I saw them standing next to each other in Exo's regular line up for the first time. And even more so every time I see them interact. I can't believe this is the first time I wrote them!

I'm glad you like it so much, that's the most wonderful feeling for a fic writer. Thank youuuu <3

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alesserrain January 27 2015, 08:17:34 UTC
This is so lovely. The writing is really beautiful and dreamy. But most of all I'm in love with Baekhyun's and Tao's dynamic here, the almost effortless way they've fallen into being together, their banter, and just their relationship and being able to make it work even with the long distance. The sex was HOT and really written well (aah I like all of them and good on you Baekhyun for filming it lol) and my favorite part is Baekhyun babbling because dialogue and talk during sex scenes are really refreshing and super funny to me. Also, the "little elephant" was so Tao and so romantic and I might have made a high pitched noise because it was cute.

I liked this a lot!

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eoryndal February 4 2015, 19:59:52 UTC
Thank you so much <3 Yes, their dynamic is so fascinating to me, I feel like I could capture only a smidgen of it, but I do think a lot of things between them go unsaid and can do so because they just understand each other. As long as they don't forget to say the really important things~

/captures your high pitched noise in my treasure chest ^^

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